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Manu_b
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(127) [2005-10-28 7:33]
(127) [2005-10-28 7:33] I like the soft aspect of the flower petal, and the plastic aspect of its center. The composition here is good, nice dark BG that keep the attention to the subject and give good contrast.
However I would have appreciate a bit more DOF.
Nice shot.
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Manu_b
(127) [2005-10-28 6:14]
(127) [2005-10-28 6:14] Superb : the colors are wonderful, the composition is great, the DOF is good.
Manu_b
(127) [2005-10-27 5:30]
(127) [2005-10-27 5:30] Good photo with good DOF, nice composition.
One little remark : seems the focus was performed on the edge of the right wing, that gives a bit soft body.
Interresting note.
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Manu_b
(127) [2005-10-27 5:05]
(127) [2005-10-27 5:05] Nice shot, good light. A bit more DOF could have been better.
Nice composition.
Manu_b
(127) [2005-10-27 5:03]
(127) [2005-10-27 5:03] Very impressive, nice photo.
Just a remark : The rain drops on the window are a bit disturbing.
Nice shot, but may you allow me some comments :
- I would have preferred the flower to be entirely in frame (not cropped down)
- Some more light to have more bright colors.