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Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-10 19:19]

I would say the image is over processed. Too bad, it could have been a real nice photo.

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-10 18:58] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

They look like Trumpeter swans. It is a good photograph of them. I did a workshop to lighten the photo, and increase the contrast slightly. Where I live on Vancouver Island, BC, Canada, we are considered the Trumpeter Swan capital of Canada.

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-10 18:52]

That human element can really add to a photo sometimes. It is good to see. Excellent composition, exposure, DOF, and sharpness. The light was beautiful.

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-10 18:49]

Beautiful light, well composed, but slightly out of focus.

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-10 18:45]

Don't worry about the blue cast so much, as it is natural. I like this photo. Mainly because it is sharp, well composed, and the exposure seems bang on. The catch light in the bird's eye is very important, and you got it. Well done

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-09 1:07] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

I like this photograph. I think it is very well done. I do have a few minor points... I felt the photo was to light overall, and needed just a little more contrast. I think it could also use a little sharpening (not much). It could have been composed with more room in front of the bird, but the photo is still strong enough to stand on it's own. I did a workshop to show the changes. Let me know what you think.

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-09 0:55]

I like the framing in this photograph! You should seriously think about sending this photograph to Sigma. It would be helpful for them! Well composed, and tack sharp! Well done!

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-09 0:28]

I do like it! Very well done. Sharpness, colour, and composition are all excellent. I like Dragon Flies, they eat mosquitoes!

Well done!

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-03-09 0:15] [+]

Nice photograph. You could have composed it a bit better though. If you had more space in front of the bird it would have been better. Also, it looks like there is a light halo around the bird, or are my eyes playing tricks on me. Did you do any dodging in photoshop with the dodging tool? I could be wrong...

Nice effort!

Olof_O Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 12 N: 11] (85) [2007-02-23 11:10]

Beautiful flower. I love the composition here, as well as the DOF.

Lars