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Nice shot, had one take a swipe at me this morning in the garden.
Greg
Nice detail, excellent lighting and brilliant composition, well done!
Greg
Nice close up, I have a pair that has shown up on my doorsteps and hope to get a few shots myself soon. Nice detail captured in the feathers, well taken.
Greg
You have the makings of a good shot, but a couple of things I would suggest when taking macros. Looking at your settings I assume that there was not a lot of light present. When shooting macro of insect you need a fast shutter speed, for one reason is that butterflies constantly move. If you couple that with a slow shutter speed and the fact the macro lens is going to pick up the slightest movement you will end up with camera blur. Consider using a higher ISO speed to compensate and try to increase you shutter speed to 500 or better. Also to gain better depth and more detail throughout set you Aperture to a value better then F8, I would try starting at F11 or better. I like the Macro Lens you are using, it is very reliable. Hope this helps.
Greg
Excellent detail, well taken I especially like the pose on the faucet which for Sparrows is quite natural. Nice work.
Greg
Brilliant shot, love the color and detail, you were prepared for this shot, well done indeed!
Greg
Good detail, well taken macro with just the right amount of catch light.
Greg

Good detail and exposure, well taken.
Greg