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You are capturing some very interesting shots and I like the diagonal here which make for an interesting composition but you really must work on your presentation.All you pics need to be cropped because of the black at the bottom.I have done another workshop to make image clearer.
A nice background so I like the original.The diagonal pattern and contrast in colour make the butterfly interesting to focus on whilst distracting patterns usually have the opposite effect.I think this is because this betterfly has a subtle pattern and is contrasted against the hard edge surface of the mat
I like the depth of field here and the highlight of the flowers in the background add to the composition nicely.I think,under the circumstances,you have achieved a good shot.It is not easy to capture something on the move as small as this.I hope to see some interesting photos as you improve your equipment.
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This is a beautiful shot.The focus is sharp and the flowers dramatic in the composition.I also like the fact that the butterfly is a little torn.Capturing the butterfly in this amount of detail makes the torn butterfly a more interesting texture.
Nice composition using rule of thirds to good effect.Again the image edit is to visable
This has really nice graduation and composition and it is nice to see so much detail from a camera here on earth!I thought it deserved a little makeover so I posted a workshop.I hope you like it.