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pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-07-02 18:09]

Amazing shot!!! The fly is loving it!!!!

Pablo.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-28 9:17] [+]

Very nice!! I like how the 2 branches appear to suddenly come out of the fog! Well done!!

CHeers!

Pablo.
Chile.

PS: 350 years is not that old for a tree.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-17 12:14]

Good shot!!! If there was an expression to be had in the fly's eyes, it would be just like a lion's growl.
I loved it.
Cheers.,

Pablo.

France
Title: Spider
Spider (7)
hvdp Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 1 N: 3] (210)

Good

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-15 17:42]

Good stuff!!! I love feeding spiders also!! And this is a great shot. I like the spider's leg extending forward, with her hairs nicely focused.
I think you've got some dust particles in your sensor, though. You can clean them yourself using a special product.
Cheers!

Pablo.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-14 17:40]

That's gruesome!!! And yet so cool!
I'm jealous of your find. A perfectly mummified fox. The same thing happens to animals in Chile's northern deserts when they die. I've only found birds and rats, and your fox is certainly amazing.
Congratulations!

India
Title: CRAB SPIDER
CRAB SPIDER (63) *
Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1899 W: 36 N: 5579] (18518)

Good

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-13 12:49]

Sumon! GReat shot!!! I love how the spider's body is twisted, ready for action.
however, I think you overdid it on the sharpness.

Cheers!
Pablo.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-13 12:48]

Great Postprocessing. I like the texture on the leaves, and the overall blueish tint. GOod work
I wonder what they looked like in colour. I would've gone for a colour shot, and perhaps pushed the green a bit further to give it the nice texture you achieved so well here.

Good work!

Pablo.
Chile.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-13 12:46]

Raimundo,
Que beleza de planta! Parabens!
As cactaceas brasileiras sao das mais bonitas. Eu adorava ver umas que colgavan das árvores no Rio. Nao me lembro do nome, mais eu tengo muita saudade delas.
Agora em espanhol, por que meu portugues está meio ferrujado:
TU foto está preciosa, pero que pasó con ese ruido que aparece? Tiene mucho granos. Que camara usaste? COn que ISO? Es una lastima ver tantos granos. Si la escaneaste, sería posible hacerlo denuvo para reducir el ruido? POdrías aplicar tecnicas de reduccion de ruido (Noise Reduction) en Photoshop para ver si logras algo.

Parabens!

Pablo

Brazil
Title: Grilo
Grilo (4)
zeca Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 14 N: 538] (2881)

Great

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-12 23:42]

Gostei, Zeca!!!!
Que boa foto, cara!!!

Pablo.

pabloneco Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (54) [2007-06-08 9:17]

Hi Felipe. I love that mushroom shot. Very lovely, but I would suggest the following: Your composition is very centered, and that makes the swerves and curves of the mushroom to be underappreciated. I would strongly suggest cropping it further and leaving only the shape of the mushroom with the stick through it. In your workshop, when you show the detail, you almost get it nicely, but I would've gone for a horizontal crop.

That's my suggestion. THe Trametes is superb though. Good shot.

Pablo.