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rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 15:01] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Rishabh,
Nice view there, great detail and beautiful colours. While the clouds may show the altitude of the place and all that, I personally think they'd be a good riddance in this case, since in my opinion they weaken the shot. I recommend cropping them out, but only down to their lowest point. That way, the darker distant colours make a sort of a roof over the lighter ones, and the shadows of the clouds in the middle and the ones in the front make a good balance. Also by removing the overexposed clouds you set the spectator's imagination free ;) I did a WS to show you what I mean..
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:44]

Incredible that no one has commented on this one. Such wonderful colours and terrific framing!
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:42]

There's a great ssence of peace in this one. Love it!
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:16]

Sharp and clear, beautiful, light colours and interesting posture. Good informative note.
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:11]

Great composition, colours and d.o.f.
TFS

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:09]

Great sharpness and wonderful d.o.f. Nice colours, well composed.
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 14:00]

Amazing detail in the plumage against a beautiful background. Nice contrasting harmony.
TFS!

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 13:37]

Hi Jacek
Interesting colours, great d.o.f. makes nice background, wonderful composition.
TFS

-Ari

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-04-07 13:30]

If only for the colours, it's a good shot. But the d.o.f. is nice, too.

rildin Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 1 N: 8] (125) [2008-03-12 9:18]

Now that's what I call camouflage! Really interesting shot, Jacek, thanks for sharing.

-Ari