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Critiques [Translate]
- goutham_ramesh
(10360) - [2006-03-19 23:11]
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Hi,
Excellent Composition, colors ,DOF and good POV
The picture has a bit of noise, did a small WS ( With previosly uploaded picture i think, it was there in the gallery for some time and it vanished!! While i was editing it) let me know if you like it
TFS
Goutham R
Hi Loot,
it's a nice portrait of the mute swan.
The noise is not disturbing but I thing you got a reddish tone in the white.
Well composed, good POV and DOF. Good details and the shallow DOF brinks the swan out icely from the BG.
Well done.
I did a WS to correct the white.
Now this is quite a close-up, Loot.
What a cute cygnet. He looks like he still has downy fuzz on his neck instead of true feathers. I can see the hairs in his nostril, and the tiny bumps on his "bald spot" in front of his eyes. You managed the whites very well in that they are not overexposed, but I agree with Gert that there is a pink tinge in the whites. Still, a very well composed portrait. TFS. : )
Hi Loot, I see you captured this swan at a bird park in Durban. I wondered if swans could live in the wild life park close to your home.
Lovely portrait of this young swan. I can see how young it still is, and you show her really well. The look in her eye is very wary of you!
The 2 workshops are good, and you definitely are in very good hands for help from Gert.
Kia ora
Janice
- scottevers7
(12267) - [2006-03-20 7:12]
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Hi Loot,
I really like the frame filling composition of this shot. This shows great detail in the plumage and face area of this young swan. Flash exposure looks good with the whits retaing the fine detail. Well seperated from the nice OOF backround.
Scott
Hi Loot,
Nice closeup profile capture. Good exposure and details. I won't add to the others comments except to say...it's a learning curve ;-} Well done.
- wkshelton
(5492) - [2006-03-20 8:59]
Hi Loot,
great Portrait, Back ground has a bit of noise but great colors, details capture and composed, Excellent work. TFS Kyle
- wuta
(2142) - [2006-03-20 15:10]
Hello Loot ,A lovely portret from the swan ,i like it ,
good compositie sharpnes and colours ,greetings Teunie .
- anavazao
(3829) - [2006-03-20 17:31]
Hi,
nice head with nice details, compostion and note!
Good idea!
Thanks Ana:)
- coasties
(27718) - [2006-03-22 0:20]
Hi Loot
Hmmm... somehow I managed to miss this young beauty.... sorry, but I guess better late than never! You have captured this young charachter well. Very good close portrait. Nice clear details and a lovely catchlight to bring the eye to life. :-)
- jeanpaul
(14117) - [2006-03-22 6:05]
Bonjour Loot
C'est une belle prise de vue de ce cygne. Belle présentation, lescouleurs et les détails sont jolis. Il a un le regard vers toi
Merci et au revoir....JP
- SkyF
(8127) - [2006-03-22 8:37]
Hello Loot,
this is a wonderful portrait, great capture of the distinguished features of this species. Excellent sharpness and beautiful POV. Great work.
Sky
- Miss_Piggy
(7387) - [2008-06-26 4:39]
Hallo Loot
An absolute stunning portrait! A very beautiful and colourful bird with an elegant and supple neckline. The details of this photo are very well displayed and clear and here I especially refer to the oval shaped eye. The feathers of this swan appear so fine, soft and fluffy, and one gets the feeling to stroke it to feel the texture. As per my previous comment this image is also worth much more than the smiley's received at present. Thanks for sharing this super close-up.
Love
Anna
- Rehanna
(18) - [2008-07-12 19:04]
Hello Loot
Die sagste ou dons veertjies is so duidelik sigbaar op hierdie jongeling. Ek hou van die oog kontak (nogmaals) en dit lyk amper of die swan so 'n klein bietjie "verdwaasd" of "skamerig" is nadat jy dit aan die slaap gevang het. Ek sien die "workshop" het gepoog om die "rooierige" skynsel op die vere weg te neem, maar ek dink dit het toe 'n groenerige skynsel veroorsaak so ek verkies jou oorspronklike foto meer. Dit het miskien meer 'n pienkerige kleur en veroorsaak 'n sagter beeld van die swan wat vir my meer in lyn is met die romatiese indrukke wat ons mos maar altyd van 'n swan het. Die donker agtergrond maak die voël so duidelik uitstaan op die foto. Me likes thank you.
Groete
Rehanna
- betsie
(0) - [2008-08-06 2:24]
Mooi foto van hierdie swaan Loot. Jammer mens sien hulle nie meer sommer in die natuur nie. Meestal net in voelparke ens?
Groete]
Betsie
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