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Cape Sparrow


Cape Sparrow
Photo Information
Copyright: Miq Ms (miqra) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 140 W: 3 N: 23] (151)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10
Categories: Birds
Camera: Sony Cybershot
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-26 14:20
Viewed: 1478
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Very common bird, they build a very untidy nest.
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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2705 W: 74 N: 8864] (30243)
  • [2004-10-26 17:48]
  • [2]

I like this collage Miq :-)
This is what I love in TN - you take pictures of animals which we in Europe could only see in zoo or on Animal Planet Channel.
Thank you for sharing!

Hi Miq,

The photo is very nice. But some more info in the note would be usefull. It's what TN is all about.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-10-27 13:34]

Hi Miq, I like both pictures but I feel they should be shown separately, you could always put the tree picture in a WS and this would leave the whole space here to be devoted to the nice sparrow. The sparrow is very good but would be better if those stalks were not behind it's head. Very good capture.

As Gerhard says, a note is expected on TN.

Good work.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-10-27 16:20]
  • [2]

The birdie is good, but I like the bushveld scene most - I would like to get out there more often.

Thanks for posting

The bird has something in its mouth. Would have been an excellent picture is a little more focussed and no branches exactly behind the beak. Otherwise nice focus on the bird. The compo is interesting. Nice bushveld thorn tree.

Miq, I'm with Paul here, both pictures could have been posted on their own. The tree makes me want to pack up for the weekend! But excelent scenery!

I really like what you have done, I need to learn a lot yet about PS. Mooi mossie.

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-10-30 9:57]

Realmente una artística presentacion Miq.
Atípica composicion con excelentes resultados.
Bellos colores, buena agudeza y perspectiva para mostrar el ave y el entorno de sus nidos.

Really an artistic presentation Miq.
Atypical composition with excellent results.
Beautiful colors, good sharpness and perspective to show to the bird and the surroundings of its nests.

Miq, great shot. I liked your ideal of showing us the place where the bird made its nest. Well done.

Lívio

Bravo,Miq
Very beautiful,really a fine idea,well captured and good framed,and beautiful result,nicely composed ,too,well done.

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