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To the spirit of TN


To the spirit of TN
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Copyright: Pankaj Bajpai (pankajbajpai) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1471 W: 98 N: 4090] (14270)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-02
Categories: Insects
Camera: Nikon D80, Sigma 70-300 4-5.6 APO DG MACRO, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/200 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): my work [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-11-13 8:01
Viewed: 624
Points: 66
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I am dedicating one of my favourite image of peacock pansy taken sometime back to the spirit of TREKNATURE.

We all from different part of the world know each other through their posts. Most of us have never seen each other or had a talk but still feel connected to each other by a deep bond of friendship.

We all learn from each others work and the critiques makes us understand the flaws and at the same time encourage us to do better.

I am glad to dedicate this post here but at the same time a bit sad as one of my butterfly posts has been removed .

Update : the post was removed as the notes provied were violating the copyright and not the image, i collected the information which was available on the net and it violated the terms of copyright,

I do request all the members to comment more on technical part of my posting and what they did not like in the post, this will surely help me to learn more and do better.

The details of peacock pansy can be seen at my earlier posting of the same species.

rakeshgupta, earthtraveler, eqshannon, Alex99, rousettus, vanderschelden, Luis52, horia, nglen, Patleboss, phlr, Juyona, cataclysta, sandpiper2, marhowie, ramthakur, angybone, MMM, tiklod, peter_stoeckl, jpinkham, Ena has marked this note useful
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To Evelynn: it is truepankajbajpai 3 11-14 19:32
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Hi Pankaj,
This is a wonderful picture of a lovely butterfly. The colors and sharpness is perfect. The POV is excellent as it shows full wings open.
Very sad to know that your post have been removed for CR purpose. I think you should put your side with strong facts of proof. May be you are saying that someone has a patent of that particular butterfly and they are preventing you to post that picture. If it is that, then it is really a serious matter.
Anyway keep posting beautiful pictures.
Thanks
Rakesh

Hi Pankaj,
Thank you for this beautiful Pansy image with dedication.
So much is excellent about this..POV openwing, color, composition, framing, mostly excellent focus details.
Because you ask for "negatives" the only thing I see could be improved would be just a tad more DOF to focus the top wing edges and top of antennae. Seems minor considering the beauty of the image.
Sorry to hear of the CR issue. Not fun. Hope you can resolve it.
TFS
Richard

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1696 W: 242 N: 5596] (19883)
  • [2007-11-13 8:29]
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Hello Pankaj,
great dedication to TN's spirit.
The photo is wonderful.
+++ Beautiful colours that are vibrent and well saturated... those eye-spots are so striking (I suppose that is what they are meant to do!)
Great composition and POV that draws the viewer's eyes towards the eye-spots.
Very sharp and detailed.
--- DOF is slightly too shallow and causes the head, antenna and wing-tips to be OOF. A higher f stop such as f/22 would have been better.
Otherwise this photo is perfect :)
Fine work Pankaj.
Well done,
Joe

p.s have you talked to Adam about the photo being removed? He might be able to explain.

Well the only one who is going to learn technical aspects of this image is me..and perhaps a few others...hard to be critical of something so perfect. I respectfully request the right to say, there is nothing wrong technically with this picture...at all. Any other correction would be totally subjective on the part of the one who questions...
Bob

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3043 W: 148 N: 4547] (14679)
  • [2007-11-13 9:14]

Hi Pankaj.
Once more beautiful picture of the amazing butterfly, wonderful flower and terrific BG. Bravo.
I like pictured specimen so much It is simply superb. Composition and POV are the best. Great colorfulness, exactness of the shapes and details. The lighting and colours of the BG are delicate at highest range. MY compliments and TFS.
Alexei.

Hi Pankaj,
this butterfly is perfect, the colours so brilliant and with good sharpness.
A fantatic shot of a noble butterfly and I like it very much.
I'm sad for the last shot which has been removed and I can't understand that.
Show us more, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • arunk Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 19] (270)
  • [2007-11-13 9:27]

Hi

It is really super ! fantastic colours and sharpness

Regards
Arun krishnaiah

Hi Pankaj,
superb coloured species and its excellent macro shot. Nicely composed. Focus, sharpness, POV, colors super. Composition, frame and BG also very nice. Red flower supply more richness to photo. good notes. thanks for sharing. best wishes
Ahmet

Hello Pankaj,
Beautiful butterfly and flower. Well composed.
TFS
Annick

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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1022 W: 5 N: 2802] (10144)
  • [2007-11-13 10:34]

Hola Pankaj.- Exelent photo. nice colors and Bg. Luis52.

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2084 W: 216 N: 3766] (12498)
  • [2007-11-13 10:39]

Hi Pankaj

Thank you very much for your lovely and very touching dedication!
No wonder this is one of your favorites images of this beautiful peacock pansy butterfly - it's gorgeous!
I really love the pose in which you captured it and the terrific composition you managed to create.
The flash is also well used and brings just enough light for the body and head. However, since you've asked for total honesty in your note, the tips of the wings are a bit blurry; now this mught be from the DOF or from the small movement of the wings and the use of flash (which would tend to make this movement more evident). I can't really pin-point why.
But still, it's a minor element in otherwise a splendid shot!
Sorry to hear about your troubles with your other post, too.

Cheers and TFS
Horia

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1993 W: 5 N: 5571] (21050)
  • [2007-11-13 11:09]

Hi Pankaji. I am glad to see you have sorted out the problem with your picture.
This posting of the Pansy butterfly is as good as it gets. the detail is spot on with fine colours. you have captured the markings so well. with a nice POV/DOF. with good notes too.
well done TFS. keep them coming.
Nick.. A freind fron England.

Hi Pankay, what a wonderfull shot, Perfect in all point, this is a truly master's painting
a great cheer,
friendly,
Pat

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1788 W: 8 N: 4639] (15001)
  • [2007-11-13 12:27]

Hi Pankaj,

What a wonderful dedication to the spirit of TN. Superb notes. Beautiful butterfly - beautiful flower - wonderful composition. You show this beauty off with fine colors and good details. So sorry to hear about your picture being removed.

Jane

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2042 W: 6 N: 2025] (13277)
  • [2007-11-13 15:17]

Hola amigo,
realmente preciosa esta captura,
bella macro color y detalles,
saludos

Hola Pankaj, es increible tu trabajo. Cada
dia te superás más y no se donde vas a llegar jajaja. Esta fotografía es fascinante por su
color, la combinación de ellos y su juego con
la mancha de las alas. Buena luz y profundidad.
Preciosa.

Un abrazo: J. Ignasi

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  • gail Gold Star Critiquer [C: 78 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-11-13 17:23]

Hello Pankaj,
The presentation is lovely!
Gail

hi pankaj,
thanks for sharing this beautiful butterfly photo.
manoj

I really do not understand the troubles you had with the other post. The notes were copyrighted????? Very odd.

Your photo is wonderful and the dedication gratefully received by all here I am sure.

Wonderful work as usual.

TFS
Evelynn : )

Hi Pankaj
Great contrast: vivid red vs grey. Nice OOF background. The DOF is little bit to shallow. Also great "eye contact" :-) Very nice dedication. Interesting thing with removed photo. What kind of information did you use in your note?
Best wishes
Krzysztof

Hi Pankaj, lovely butterfly with superb colors, wonderful details, splendid sharpness, elegant presentation, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Pankaj,
Perfect color and exposure, well composed.
In the "spirit of TN" :), The point of focus could be improved, but overall a very beautiful image here. At F/14, you needed to get more parallel to the b-flie's open wing pose, or increase the DOF from this POV..IMHO ;}
Well done.
Howard

Great shot of this most glamorous butterfly from India, Pankaj.
Good POV. The open wing stance is a good stroke of luck, giving you the opportunity to capture it in its glorious aspect.
Well done and TFS.
Ram

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 927 W: 4 N: 2317] (10792)
  • [2007-11-14 6:19]

Panakjdada, I totally agree and we have not seen each other but my family members know you/ramsir/hp/ramesh/murali/partha sir. Wonderful shot and such a lovely shot but only one thing is the right side of the shot is slightly disturbed. my personal opinion. Ganesh

This is a beautiful image. I cannot understand why your other post was removed. I don't see how the notes would cause removal of the photo. Hmmm

This is gorgeous - beautiful colors and I love the feeling of freedom from the photo! :)

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 755 W: 0 N: 1515] (6928)
  • [2007-11-14 11:14]

Hi Pankaj
Beautiful composition.Very sharp image and excellent POV.Colors and details are lovely.
TFS Michel

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  • tiklod Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 300 W: 74 N: 883] (3367)
  • [2007-11-14 12:58]

Hello Pankaj,
Excellent note! I hope you'll resolve your problem quickly.
This picture has excellent POV. Maybe not enough DOF (antenna little bit unfocused). The rest is SPLENDID!!!
TFS and best regards... my foreign friend

Claude

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  • Debz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 582 W: 0 N: 866] (3283)
  • [2007-11-14 15:11]

Hi Pankaj, you know all of your Butterfly and other shots are of the highest standard. All beautifully composed, so much so you should make a book. What a wonderful dedication to all on TN - this beautiful specimen! Lovley pov and colours, light and markings are striking, perfect composition.
I am shocked to hear one of your shot got taken down - how can that be? If you took the shot then you have the copyright, I am sure we all would like to know the problem and maybe help!
Sometimes mistakes are made on these matters.

Anyhow this Peacock Pansy is a fine work.

tfs
debz

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  • deud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 500 W: 2 N: 466] (2121)
  • [2007-11-14 22:38]

this is perfect! great focus, details, colors, composition. amazing colors. tfs

beautiful colors pankaj!
greatly done!
tfs
caroline

Hello Pankaj,
an ideally approached, very elegant, perfectly clear presentation of a peacock pansy butterfly. There is much life and motion in this image. Technically and artistically perfect. Quintessential.
Thank you! My best regards,
Peter

Pankaj, you have lovely colors and contrasts here -- vivid and delicate beauty. I can easily understand why this is a personal favorite of yours. You have great clarity and etail in this image, quite good DOF with that aperture, though just a tad soft on the upper left, and really nice use of cropping and the flower the accent your composition. Well done.

Jim

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  • Ena Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 61 N: 570] (2341)
  • [2007-11-28 14:40]

Hi Pankaj,
Wonderful shot! Good sharpness! Nice colors and composition!
Regards
Ena

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