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Macro of a fly


Macro of a fly
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Copyright: Pankaj Bajpai (pankajbajpai) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1558 W: 105 N: 4679] (16507)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-20
Categories: Insects
Camera: Nikon D80, Sigma 70-300 4-5.6 APO DG MACRO, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-20 3:50
Viewed: 945
Points: 41
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Toady i found this little fly perched on the green leaf of parijat. The red eyes attracted me to shoot and i took this shot handheld using the sigma 70/300 lens in macro mode. Before i could take a couple of shots thge fly was gone but i still got this average macro and decided to post it as these days i am not able to shoot much.

The raw to jpeg conversion, cropping, resizing and framing done.

MMM, jaycee, eqshannon, Royaldevon, JoseMiguel, ramthakur, takos1, SelenE, Ena, zulfu has marked this note useful
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Hi Pankaj,
A quite good close-up with pretty good sharpness, with a tripod
it had been more sharp.
Nice POV and well composed.
Well done.

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2001 W: 226 N: 6845] (24727)
  • [2008-02-20 5:16]

Hello Pankaj,
a good macro of this fly.
The red eyes stand out with stark contrast against the dark surroundings.
Quite good sharpness and detail.
Great composition and a striking head-on POV.
Excellent flash-work.
Well done Pankaj,
Joe

Nice fly shot. Although, personally, I would have liked the head area to be more detailed. There are hairs on the face in vertical rows next to each eye that you should be able to see clearly as well as mouth parts. The leaf hairs should be more clearly defined as well. Also the background, legs and abdomen look more "out of focus blurry" rather than a smooth blending which should happen with tight macro shots. The pic is a little to "grainy" too. Possibly a tripod or monopod might get you there. You also might try increasing the shutter speed to help with camera shake. For insect macro shots like this I've found that the Canon EF 100mm F2.8 Macro USM and the Canon MP-E 65mm f2.8 1-5x Macro Photo lenses, or equal, to get the required detail for this type of shots.
However, overall this is a good pic but with insect macro shots, fine detail is everything.

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 926 W: 0 N: 1998] (8963)
  • [2008-02-20 6:39]

Hello Pankaj
Excellent closed up of that fly .Great details and sharp image.Light is also very nice.
TFS Michel

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2493 W: 11 N: 6885] (21912)
  • [2008-02-20 7:51]

Hi Pankaj,

A nice macro of this colorful fly. I love the pose on the leaf. Good colors and sharp details. An excellent composition.

Jane

I know there isn't but I could swear I see a cornea..which isn't possible...but it gives a cloudy appearance of one in the left eye...and makes it look as though he is staring right at you/us. On the edge of a leaf..very nice!
Bob

Hello Pankaj,

If this was in a horror film, the cinema would be evacuating! What a terrific macro!
Excellent details and colours! I like the diagonal composition!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Many thanks for your earm comments on 'These are females!'

Hi Pankaj,
That red eyes are wonderful. Well seen with dark background. Very nice pov and composition.
JC

Hi Pankaj,
You did it pretty well to have this macro with the 70/300, and specially handheld.
Textures on the leaf and insect's head are pretty good.
I like a lot the colours and composition made here, the image has a lot of visual impact.
Congratulations and thanks for share it.
My best regards,
JM

Hi Pankaj, superb portrait of this fly with splendid red eyes, wonderful sharpness and superb colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1110 W: 5 N: 3457] (12761)
  • [2008-02-20 19:23]

Hola Pankaj.
Great image of this green fly. They have a very nice red color on the eyes. Very sharp Pankaj.
Luis52.

Very good macro of a fly's face with your 70-300mm, Pankaj.
The red eyes are very well captured.
TFS and regards.
Ram

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  • takos1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 264 W: 25 N: 206] (2599)
  • [2008-02-20 23:10]

Ciao Pankaj,
bellissima questa foto macro!
Dettagli finissimi e stupendi colori, buona la composizione, brava|

Grazie.
Franco

Buen encuadre, colores y presentación original y efectiva. Diferente y muy atractiva.
Abrazo: J. Ignasi

Hello Pankaj,

Nice macro-shot of this fly. With the warmer weather, flies become more and more difficult to take the picture of. They are more agitated. Nice composition and colours.
Cheers,
Mariki

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2405 W: 63 N: 4227] (13822)
  • [2008-02-21 1:34]

Hi Pankaj,
Eyes look amazing. I liked your POV a lot. Well composed macro with good colors and details. TFS
Best wishes,
Selen

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  • Ena Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 61 N: 591] (2458)
  • [2008-02-21 1:34]

Hi Pankaj,
Good macro shot!
Nice diagonal composition!
TFS
Ena

Superbe macro, quelle belle tête d'une grande netteté avec des belles couleurs naturelles.
Bravo
Marie

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-02-21 18:32]

Hello Pankaj

The green leaf cuts through the frame on a lovely diagonal arc.
The fly's red eyes contrast the colour nicely and are well detailed.
Well balanced ,the dark and light play off each other nicely.
Excellent close up,with sharp details.
TFS
Rob

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  • zulfu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1073 W: 0 N: 162] (870)
  • [2008-03-03 13:15]

Hello Pankaj,
Another excellent capture. Perfect composition. Great light and natural colours.
Regards,
Mehmet

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  • deud Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 10 N: 504] (2372)
  • [2008-03-22 7:02]

i really like this kind of a portrait! very well done and composed. tfs

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