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Sunset at the Jim Corbett National Park


Sunset at the Jim  Corbett National Park
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Copyright: Goldy RS (goldyrs) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 55 N: 1271] (4842)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-06-11
Categories: River
Camera: Canon S2 IS
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Theme(s): Jim Corbett, Tigers & the National Park [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-09 4:50
Viewed: 609
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My fascination for this Tiger reserve always seems to get the better of me.
This time I tried to improve my presentation skills...
Hope you like it:)

Well...in retrospect, I laugh at the older 'presentation',I'd, at that point in time, hit upon a brainwave to do a powerpoint of it...
It was a learning...I'm still learning...I hope this shot appeals more to your taste, like it does to mine...
I've not written about my favourite haunt, the Jim Corbett National Park for sometime now, I've been too busy with my mood swings;)...I do hope those of you planning to visit this beautiful Tiger Reserve get to see this place...I find it the most beautiful spot in there...
Thanks for looking and helping me improve...

Heaven, CeltickRanger, marhowie, eqshannon, ellis49, gerbilratz, JoseMiguel, pekkavalo1, maurydv, smitha, gannu, Necipp, ramthakur, Alex99, earthtraveler, JPlumb, JoshLewis, pierrefonds, Miss_Piggy has marked this note useful
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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2390 W: 194 N: 1991] (8113)
  • [2008-04-09 5:15]

Hi Goldy,
both your presentations are wonderful. Different, but each has wonderful qualities. The other version is more abstract where this one is more a natural approach.
What both have in common is a great composition of wonderful scenery and a fabulous division of space. I also like the format you presenting this in.
Very well done.
Sky

Hi Goldy,
Very nice presentation. Great composition and lighting.
TFS
Wei

Hi Goldy!

Isn't it marvellous to be able to say: I'm still learning? I hate arrogant people who want to give the impression that they know... Life becomes interesting through learning processes! That's how I see it.

Now, this re-post is, in my eyes, much better than the original. It's sharper and clearer, there are much more details visible and the colours seem to be more natural.

Kind regards

Markus

hello Goldy

if i compare this composition with the first one,
i love much more this one, it is more of my taste,
on this one i love the contrast between
the shadowed foreground and the rest of the image,
and i love that each step of the image has
his own tone of colours, TFS

Asbed

Hi Goldy,
This is a nice improvement. The light and color variations seen in the upper 2/3rds of your frame give this one a great look :)
And I'm still learning also, YOU NEVER STOP..
Howard

hello goldy,
very nice shot, the colours of nature have been presented so well with great aesthetics, liked the framing, the composition and the pov very much,
well done,
tfs & regards
pankaj

Canon tonality and subtle differences..I can tell a Canon image even in thumbnail. Very nicely doe by you and the Creator as well who presented it for your eyes!
Bob

Hi Goldy,
a very fine shot and is an improvement.
Lovely colours and nice lighting. Only a small nit,
the line is not complete straight but that's a minor.
Yes, we all still learning.
Well done.

Hi goldy, I did not see the previous upload, but the colours on this is excellent. Good composition and fine picture to look at...nice!!

Hi Goldy,
A great presentation of this stunning natural reserve.
It transmit a quiet and pleasant mood.
I like a lot the wide composition made, and the color match with the framing used.
Congratulations and thanks for share.
My best regards,
JM

Hello Goldy,
This one is very beautiful. Amazing colours and an excellent composition. We're all learning every day.
Regards,
Peter

Hello Goldy,

Nice landscape. Good improvement in the colours of the picture compare to the firs post. Very nice light.
Cheers,
Mariki

Hi Goldy,

Very nice panorama, nice warm colours and well composed breath taking view.

TFS

Pekka

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2088 W: 9 N: 5854] (22172)
  • [2008-04-09 12:06]

Hi Goldy. You have capture some very warm colours in this one. a nice compostion. with good lighting. well done TFS.
Nick..

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  • cako Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 443 W: 0 N: 458] (2293)
  • [2008-04-09 12:15]

Hi Goldy
this is very nice landscape
Great composition and lighting
very well done.

Paesaggio di grande effetto emozionale, composizione come nel tuo intento in stile pittorico, preferisco questa seconda versione. UN buon lavoro. Grazie e complimenti. Cioao Maurizio

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  • gondox Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 264 W: 60 N: 227] (1157)
  • [2008-04-09 15:49]

Hi Goldy!

I prefer this one to the ws, it is more smooth, while the fg part maybe even too soft, but the overall softness fits well this layered image! Your golden (or goldy :) sorry for being too obvious ) colored presentation always catches me, it is not a common yellowish or orangish but a special to you color space! TFS!

Best regards,
Andor

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  • smitha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 284 W: 77 N: 905] (3429)
  • [2008-04-09 23:20]

Hello Goldy,
A lovely sunset! I liked both he versions.One fiery red and the other more golden.Good POV and details. I liked the way the light has turned the river a golden liquid and the dark foreground and the looming mountains in the background.A fine picture indeed.:)
Well done,
TFS,
Smitha.

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 985 W: 4 N: 2516] (11695)
  • [2008-04-10 2:40]

Hello Goldy, What a splendid shot. Pefect colors superb rich action and well defined composition.
Shot ++++
Ganesh

Hi Goldy, fascinating sunset with superb colors, splendid composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hello Goldy lovely colour tones and a fine composition. Framing suits well also tfs rgds Necip

I think everyone would consider this as a painting and not as a photograph at first glance, Goldy.
Having said that, I compliment you for your constantly increasing technical skills and assure you that I have derived great pleasure by looking at this beautiful creation.
Keep going and all the best!
Ram

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3138 W: 148 N: 4731] (15287)
  • [2008-04-11 10:08]

Hi Goldy.
Excellent art shot looks like painted by water-colors. Wonderful use of lights and colors, very nice framing and compositing of the picture. Framing of the shot is perfect too. My best wishes.
Alexei.

Hi Goldy,
I love the rich warm colors of this and the various layers and tones of hills and water make for a beautiful composition. Deffinately an art piece. I'd love to visit Corbett Nat. Park if I ever return to India. Tfs Richard

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  • JPlumb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 160 N: 894] (2837)
  • [2008-04-14 21:40]

Hi Goldy, very beautiful colour seen in this shot at Jim Corbett National Park. I like the layering effect you have achieved with the mountains. Very nice composition and presentation as a whole.

Thanks, John

Should have made this lovely photo a panorama. If you need any help with posting a panorama, please let me know. What a beautiful Sunset! Thanks for sharing! Cheers Josh Lewis.

Hi Goldy,

The sunset is giving nice colors to the sky, to the water and a set of shadows to the photo. The point of view leads our eyes to the top of the mountain. Have a nice day.

Pierre

Hallo Goldy
Very pleasant image with warm and glowing colours. Peaceful and serene view. The different layers of colours in this scene is really impressive and I can count at least 7 different shades ranging from gold to brownish-orange. Watching a lovely sunset like this is just the thing to end of an up and down or hasty day.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards
Anna

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