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Copyright: Victor Mukherjee (vmukherjee) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 0 N: 114] (1104)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-09
Categories: Sky
Camera: Olympus Sp 510uz
Exposure: f/8, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-12-09 21:01
Viewed: 544
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This flower was making a beautiful frame against the red sky. I didn't want to miss the chance. Hope you like it.
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Very nicely done. Love the orange hue. My only complaint is the bit of vegetation in the lower left. I feel that should have been cropped or cloned out. Great photo otherwise.

A simple and good idea. I like it.

Effectiveness of simplicity can be great if handled wisely, and I think it comes through this picture. It has an artistic taste, so I won't bother you with the question of white balance. The bottom left tree I would crop and the same wide line from the top part to keep subject in center vertically. That would give a more panoramic view, if you like it, or you could add a frame to compensate that a bit if you don't.TFS

Regards,
Andor

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 468 W: 126 N: 281] (1562)
  • [2007-12-10 2:54]

Hi Victor
very good capture and composition.
nice colors and POV..
well done.

Taba

Hi Victor,
I like the subject, color and the concept. I too have an idea for a different crop. I would crop quite a bit off the top and left side...thereby moving the sun out of the center in both directions. I think the curving sweep of the grass would be even more dynamic.

TFS
Evelynn : )

Hello Victor,
This is a simple but attractive composition, seen from an accurate point of view!
Lovely warm colours, nice sharpness in the straw...
A moody image indeed!
Greetings,
Pablo

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