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Where's my other friends?


Where's my other friends?
Photo Information
Copyright: Bima Aryasena (yasin) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 1 N: 43] (129)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-10
Categories: Mammals
Camera: Nikon D200, Nikkor AF-S VR 70-200mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-15 3:22
Viewed: 781
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There's a place on a very huge "Barito" river called Monkey Island... Yup, it's an island with hundred of monkeys, or more, live there.

Small island, on the river. Wonder how they got there. Swimming across the river?
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To marhowie: Thanks Howard!yasin 1 06-10 23:11
To Silvio2006: workshopyasin 1 03-05 20:13
To warnzy: Great editing, thanks Mike!yasin 1 02-20 17:32
To tuslaw: Thanx Mr. Tuslaw!yasin 1 02-17 17:38
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Bima,
Welcome to TN. Nice photo, good pose but I think you might want to lighten it up a bit and perhaps sharpen just a tad. I did a little experimenting on it so if you want to check it out got to workshop. TFS Keep shooting and sending in your photos.
Ron

Hi Bima,

Welcome to TN. I agree with Ron that the image could be made a little lighter so that we can see the detail in the Monkey's face. One of things I found most difficult when I started posting on TN, was converting and resizing the image in a way that maintained the detail and lighting - I have posted a version to workshop. That said, this is a nice image, with good composition and perspective. You have also captured a nice pose from the monkey. Keep the images coming.

Mike

Hi Bima, great portrait of lovely couple monkey, wonderful composition, very well done, welcome on TN, ciao Silvio

Hi Bima,
You have a good POV and I like the animals pose.
I think Rons WS has helped here.
TFS!
Howard

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