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Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 59 N: 1553] (5128)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-18
Categories: Insects
Camera: Nikon D50, Sigma 70-300 F4-5,6 APO DG MACRO, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-06 18:11
Viewed: 519
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello friends in TN,

I was rolling on the floor laughing at a video on You Tube. It reminded me of the torn butterfly I kept in my digital shoebox.

So this is a delightful version of Torn by Johan Lippowitz with Natalie Imbruglia.


Im all out of faith, this is how I feel
Im cold and I am shamed lying naked on the floor
Illusion never changed into something real
Im wide awake and I can see the perfect sky is torn
Youre a little late, Im already torn. torn.


Happy viewing.
Jusni

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hello jusni,
fine capture of this swallow tail butterfly, the colours are beautiful, fine pov and nice composition, liked the framing too,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 0 N: 1371] (4547)
  • [2008-03-06 19:17]

That was funny, this guy is good! And your picture too is good, with these torn butterfly and flower! Who could imagine that on TN we'd see a video matching the picture. Or the notes matching the picture... or the song ????? Thanks Jusni, you made me laugh and this is quite a neat picture of both these creatures being torn and shamed lying naked in front of my eyes. Bye bye!

Francine

Abang,
Very beautiful colouration on the Swallow tail!
good clarity and details in the shot
well done
cheers
tony

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  • Tabib Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 114 W: 5 N: 109] (532)
  • [2008-03-06 19:56]

Hi Jusni,

Kasihan!
All torn - butterfly and the flower petals.
"Happy voting to you too!"

/Redzlan/.

Hello Jusni,
Nice shot at this torn butterfly. Good use of flash that reveal detail. Beautifully composed picture. Very well done and tfs.
JC

Nice shot of this veteran b.fly on a veteran flower Jusni, the limited focus, contrast colors and good composition make this a fine take, TFS my friend.
Mehmet

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2036 W: 6 N: 2017] (13253)
  • [2008-03-06 23:51]

Hola Jusni,
excelente trabajo y bella captura,
buena iluminación y pov...
saludos

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3446 W: 144 N: 5881] (17425)
  • [2008-03-06 23:54]

Hello Jusni, your dear old butterfly looks like it is on its last days. Its wings look very chewed, and so does the flower.
Nicely presented
Janice

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1714 W: 24 N: 4988] (16346)
  • [2008-03-07 0:31]

Hi Jusni,
Wonderful shot of this beautiful butterfly but sadly the wings are torn. It has indeed seen better days. Very impressive sharpness and nice colours. You have used the flash light perfectly and handled the exposure well. Excellent POV and composition. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

* I enjoyed the video too, it was hilarious and full of suggestive gestures.

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3029 W: 148 N: 4520] (14595)
  • [2008-03-07 1:11]

Hi Jusni.
You have shared picture of a very nice scene. Both flower and butterfly are wonderful as well as the composition of the image and cropping. I also like excellent DOF and level of sharpness (of the main subject) and smoothness of the BG. I thinks the level of contrast (may be exposure too) is not the best. Picture is looked as underexposed a bit. However, this is matter of taste. My best regards and kind wishes.
Alexei.

Hi Jusni,what a very nice butterfly!! She's old but always fascinating,great colours,thanks for share,Luciano

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1778 W: 8 N: 4597] (14871)
  • [2008-03-07 8:40]

Hi Jusni,

A beautiful flower and a wonderful butterfly. The colors are excellent. Nice details and a good composition.

Jane

hello Jusni

another of your fine macrophoto shots of butterflys,
excellent POV and framing, lovely light of the foreground,
excellent sharpness and details, TFS

Asbed

Hi Jusni, elegant butterfly and splendid flower with wonderful colors, great details and excellent sharpness, superb composition, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Hi Jusni,

Beautiful and tragic image, with stunning detail and really nice pov and dof. And thank you so much for pointing us to the video. It was brilliant.

Nice weekend,

Mike

Salam dear friend Jusni,
A great macro of very beautiful butterfly and flower with sharp focus, nice composition and POV. Your notes also good to read. I also looked at the link. The guy very funny, good selected video-clip:). Thanks.
have a nice weeken, ve-selam
Ahmet

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  • demeve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 511 W: 8 N: 1096] (4054)
  • [2008-03-07 18:33]

Hello Jusni,
Another beautiful presentation, very nice colors
We still don't have butterflies here, but it's getting
warm so soon they will be here..

Everton

Hello Jusni!

Your shot is very attractive to me because it presents absolutely unknown plant snd butterfly in poland. Beautiful egzotic scene, well captured!

Regards
Jacek

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-03-09 21:33]

Hello Jusni

Very good focus and sharpness of detail.
The lighting is well utilized and the colours are natural and vibrant.
Excellent POV,the butterfly's colours and markings show well,very good texture captured.
The wings are tattered,but the insect seems quite healthy.
TFS

Rob

Hi Jusni,

A nice image of the butterfly on the flower, the point of view is showing the details and colors of the insect and flower. The subject is well framed. Butterflies are so fragile. Have a nice day.

Pierre

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 0 N: 184] (890)
  • [2008-09-01 0:56]

assalamualaikum Jusni,
this is nice capture. Beautiful butterfly as well the flower.
You must have waited for sometimes. It teaches us to be very patient.
Great composition with sharpness and clarity superbly done.
Regards,
Foozi

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