looking for prey

Critiques [Translate]

•  
• ellis49 (30807)
• [2005-06-28 11:09]

A good picture for the start, Eleen.
Good composition, fgood details and nice colours. The bright part to the left is not nice, but I think its a reflection.
Well done.

Welcome to TN.

•  
• liquidsunshine (11494)
• [2005-06-28 11:14]
• - [workshop] [compare]

Great first post Eleen,
Well composed, good detail and colours. Well exposed. The focus is a bit soft for me. I've done a quick WS to sharpen the image a bit.
Welcome to TN Eleen, Looking forward to seeing many more of your posts.

•  
• ljsugarnspice (263)
• [2005-06-28 11:44]

Welcome! Good job here! The colors are great, but the light spot is a little distracting. I would like to know a little more about the species of the snakes. Thanks for joining us!

•  
• gerhardt (11585)
• [2005-06-28 17:04]

Welcome to TN. It is a very pleasing first post. Lovely composition and colors. Interesting subject. Great post, well done.

•  
• extramundi (12818)
• [2005-06-28 17:49]

Very nice first post in TN.
It is a interesting and beautiful scene with the two snakes, nice background and all the green palette. Good work, hope to see more soon.
Welcome to TN.

•  
• Ah_Thong (142)
• [2005-06-28 22:41]
• - [workshop] [compare]

hello eleen,
welcome to TrekNature.. very nice first posting here... i enjoy ur works in Treklens and TrekEarth very much. Hope you will post more here..

I dont really like snakes.. but inside this photo, the snakes really looks cute and nice.. i like the colors very much... .. but i dont like the 'white' part on the left.. i made a simple workshop, crop it out to improve the overall composition.

nice day
-thong-

•  
• chiliu (6494)
• [2005-06-29 0:18]

Very nice shot!
Great colour,good details,well composition.
TFS!

•  
• jagathcham (599)
• [2005-06-29 0:44]

Hey, this is nice looking guy.
Very colourful, very interesting.
I like this POV and compo.
Thanks

•  
• manyee (21070)
• [2005-06-29 1:16]

Very interesting shot, Eleen. The focus on the green snake is very sharp. Good exposure and excellent composition. Beautiful colors. Well done! Thank you for sharing and a warm welcome to TN. : )

•  
• Okan (518)
• [2005-06-29 2:46]
• - [workshop] [compare]

Good first post Eleen. The head of the striped ones isn't much evident and the lightning on the left is a bit disturbing. Colours and sharpness is fine. Welcome to Tn and go on we look forward for your photos.
I prepared a workshop for you hope you like it.

•  
• dew77 (13209)
• [2005-06-29 3:31]

Hello Eleen!
Welcome to TN.Very nice first post.Vivid colors,details,clear eyes framing and composition are wonderful.Thanks for sharing.

•  
• sandpiper2 (14141)
• [2005-06-29 7:55]

Welcome to TN. Its interesting that you've attracted three workshops already. Don't be put off by that, it means people liked you shot but feel it could be improved slightly with a litle post-processing.
The colours are stunning and the composition is quite interesting.
Look forward to seeing more of your work here.
Chris

•  
• Graal (5032)
• [2005-06-29 16:12]

Very good picture, Eleen. Welcome on the TN.
I like the colours and sharpness.
Regards,
Aleksander

•  
• bikram (17)
• [2005-06-30 10:23]

Nice image! Cheers

•  
• Midi (2417)
• [2005-06-30 12:24]

yes for your first shot, it's a good one. we don't often see snakes on TN. Nice colours and good detail.
The left part is disturbing a bit. but still a good shot.
Welcome.
JL.

•  
• ddg (5111)
• [2005-07-01 12:21]

Bonjour Eleen, superbe photo pour une premiére, belle composition.Bienvenue sur TN. TFS Didier.

•  
• Photograph2u (0)
• [2005-07-03 15:52]

Nice and bright colour. This is a good photo of two snakes and I like the soft focus of the background it makes the subject pop-out.

Thx for your comments, Yan

•  
• JeanMichel (2864)
• [2005-07-04 3:33]

Welcome to TN, Eleen. I've never seen two snakes of different breeds in such a close position. Very good colors and soft light, despite the what seemed to be a low light condition. IMO, left and a bit of top part could be cropped out for a better impact of the subject. Anyway, very promising first post. Thanks for sharing.
Jean-Michel

•  
• japie (5187)
• [2005-07-27 1:00]

Wow Eleen, this is great. You did an excellent jop on the composition, but I dont like you subject :-)

Very well done and thanks for posting

•  
• magiqa (695)
• [2005-08-18 20:33]

Looks dangerous and poisonous to me, but it is an excellent picture!

•  
• livios (16906)
• [2005-09-18 12:29]

Eleen, this is a very nice photo.

Excellent moment; I like colors and composition.

I guess I would be afraid of them if I had to take the picture.

Which camera did you use?

Great job.

•  
• chrish (372)
• [2005-10-01 13:42]

Interesting shot.

The top snake is known as a Red-tailed Ratsnake in the west and the larger bottom snake is a Temple Viper (also known as a Wagler's Viper).

This species is the one found in the snake temple in Penang. It is venomous, but it is generally docile so tourists regularly handle them. I didn't because I know better than to handle venomous snakes - docile or not!

•  
• reina (2024)
• [2006-02-02 18:16]

Hi Eleen, you have a great country for this hobby. Its on my top list. For your pictures I think you have nice subjects but its a bit of distance. You can change it some with programs on the computer. But its better to notice it before you take the picture.
Its always good to provide some notes about your camera and lenses. It makes it easier for others to give you more detailed info.
TFS Reina

•  
• raphafraga (243)
• [2006-03-01 15:38]

Very good shot. Nice composition and colors.
Congratulations!

•  
• maurizio50 (819)
• [2006-03-22 6:12]

Very nice shot Eleen!
Maurizio

•  
• keanhoon (1171)
• [2006-04-04 10:08]

Interesting shot with two specis of snake going together. Haven't seen this before. TFS.

•  
• jmp (8411)
• [2006-05-10 8:42]

Hi Eleen,
Today I've seen this snake. Congrutalations. Perfect photo!
José M.

•  
• csmnlm (443)
• [2006-06-29 11:31]

Hi ELEEN,
This is perfect shot for first time...
Excellent.....

•  
• mario-roberto (2627)
• [2006-06-29 11:57]

fantastic!

•  
• captainsgirl (4082)
• [2006-08-18 12:00]

I like the photo..even though I really don't like snakes...:o)!!
I think you did an awesome job!
Donna :o)

•  
• swarg (369)
• [2007-01-08 9:11]

Great shot, Like the way you cropped the image, giving the snake space to move, Good DOF

TFS

•  
• alejandroguzman (452)
• [2007-02-16 0:12]

Hello Eleen:
Very nice compo.
Great contrast and DOF.

TFS
Cheers
Edgar.