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Papillon


Papillon
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Copyright: Liliane Bronner (Liliane) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 6] (434)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-23
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon PowerShot G7
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-09 11:26
Viewed: 546
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Première photo publiée sur ce site.
J'ai aimé le contraste de couleurs entre le dessus et le dessous de l'aile du papillon.
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  • batu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1059 W: 290 N: 3944] (13334)
  • [2007-10-09 12:55]

Bonjour Liliane,
there is no response to your picture up to now. You have to know that there is a specific dynamics on this site which is driven by comments given to pictures of other members. Furthermore, you are a newcomer (the start is not always easy) and your picture is not optimal in several respects. But I think you joined this site not only to present your pictures but also to learn about photography. So, I encourage you to contribute further on by pictures and comments.
I would like to give some comments to your picture:
You demonstrate that you can achieve good focus and sharpness. Point of view is not really suitable, because the head of the butterfly is outside depth of field and focus. Best sharpness is on the left hinwing which forms only a minor part of the picture. The right antenna is 'cut'. Cropping is too narrow - a little more space between butterfly and the margin would be advantageous.
Best wishes and welcome to TN,
Peter

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