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Copyright: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 440 N: 2892] (14481)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-16
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 350D, Sigma 70-300mm F4-5.6 APO DG Macro
Exposure: f/8, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-16 8:31
Viewed: 645
Points: 66
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
bonjour a tous.
c'est une premiere pour moi de presenter cet oiseau,c'est la deuxieme fois qu'il s'approche des mangeoires et la premiere fois que j'arrive a le prendre.
c'est un troglodyte mignon,il n'arrete pas de bouger ce qui ne rend pas facile la prise de vue.
je posterais une autre image mais vu de derriere.
bon week end.
info .

Hello everyone.
This is a first for me to present this bird, this is the second time he approached feeders, and the first time that I had to pick him up.
It is a troglodyte cute, it arrete not move that does not easily taken.
I posterais another image, but due backside.
good week end

wallhalla15, fiyo, martic, anel, Alex99, fartash, uleko, nglen, Argus, Ena, mecamich, haraprasan, marhowie, undoredo, Patleboss, peter_stoeckl, tiklod has marked this note useful
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Hi laurent,
superb composition and razor sharp image.
saturated colors.
TFS
CoolNik

Bonjour Laurent,
this is a very good picture. Great sharpness, very good POV and very nice colours. This is a very good composition. Thank you.
Gr.
Heinz

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 958 W: 5 N: 2373] (8866)
  • [2007-11-16 9:01]

Hello Laurent, very nice capture with a superb composition
Superb detail,and colours. Very sharp and clear.
Thanks for posting

Bonjour Laurent,
Il est toutmignon ton troglodyte, couleurs et netteté parfaites, une très jolie composition avec un superbe BG, j'en ai vu un une fois dans mon jardin mais le temps d'attraper mon appareil il avait disparu.
très bien vu
amicalement
Jean-Michel

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  • anel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1241 W: 0 N: 2229] (9388)
  • [2007-11-16 9:22]
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Bonsoir Laurent,
Très réussie cette photo du minuscule troglodyte.Belle pose et excellente composition décentrée. Arrière-plan de toute beauté, as-tu encore mis un de tes pulls dans le décor?;-)
Merci de ce plaisir pour les yeex.
Bonne soirée
Anne

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3173 W: 153 N: 4793] (15477)
  • [2007-11-16 9:40]

Hi Laurent.
Terrific by subject and quality bird picture. Its colour palette (first of all I mean BG) if unreal and fine. V-shaped composition, created by tree branches is so attractive. Reproduction of the bird at nice pose is brilliant. Bravo and kind regards. Superb done.
Alexei.

Hello again my friend :o)
Excellent shot of this beautiful Wren,
Great focusing,exposure and composition,
Superb shot,Welldone.

Regards
Fartash

Bonsoir Laurent,

Un de mes oiseaux préférés ! Très bien composé, très bonne netteté. Bravo!
Mariki

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2582 W: 170 N: 7867] (24879)
  • [2007-11-16 9:53]

Hello Laurent,
Wow, you're lucky to have captured this little beauty and very well done too. I love its rather typical pose. All in focus, sharp details and fine natural colours. Well composed too.
Many thanks, Ulla

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2130 W: 9 N: 5959] (22526)
  • [2007-11-16 9:59]

Hi laurent. Full marks on this one . the detail is spot on . you have captured sharp focusing. good colours and use of the light to its best.a nice pose and DOF. well done TFS.
Nick..
Have a good weekend.

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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2765 W: 150 N: 7969] (24819)
  • [2007-11-16 10:00]
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Bonjour Laurent,
Great capture of a Wren, a difficult bird to photograph well, but this is and excellent result with fine sharpness and pose.
The central vertical branch makes the composition difficult. The solution is either to clone it away or to crop a little more on the right side, but the shot of the wren itself is brilliant!
Merci et bon weekend,
Ivan

Hello Laurent
Fantastic dof and sharpness on this very tiny wren..the green and yellow bg really does highlight your good focus and almost looks abstract..I like it very much.
Best Regards
Paul

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 787 W: 0 N: 1581] (7260)
  • [2007-11-16 10:15]

Salut Laurent
Belle presentation.J'aime bien la pause de ton sujet de plus l'image est nette avec d'excellent details.J'aime bien également les couleurs de l'arriere plan.
Merci Michel

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1883 W: 245 N: 6168] (21966)
  • [2007-11-16 10:40]

Wow this is so sharp!!!
Beautiful photo.
+++ Perfect POV and composition.
A good pose aswell.
Superb details in the plumage.
Nice lighting and colours.
Great DOF aswell.
--- Nothing :)
Well done Laurent.
Thanks,
Joe

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3464 W: 145 N: 5943] (17794)
  • [2007-11-16 11:35]

Bonjour Laurent, this is great!
The colours and exposure seem perfect. The BG is good, it really helps to make the bird stand out so well.
TFS
JAnice

Bonsoir Laurent,en effet il ne sont pas facile à photographier ces petit,je suis content de pouvoir le regarder comme cela car d'habitude je vois juste passer une petite boule brune(jamais le temps de prendre l'appareil,c'est vexant!!loll)
Beau shot,merci
Mich

Hello Laurent,
Good pose and sharpness.
Background colours are extraordinary; makes me think about your mom's images;-). Please, do not tell:-))
Well done
TFS
Annick

Hi Laurent, cute bird in superb pose, great details and excellent sharpness, splendid blurry BG with wonderful colors, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Hi Laurent,
it's a wonderful shot, this bird is beautiful and I love the fresh colours, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

hello laurent,
lovely composition, i liked the colourful illuminated bg very much, sharp image, great pose, liked the colours and the composition,
well done,
tfs & regards
pankaj

Hi Laurent,
A beautiful capture of this wren bird. It looks to be very small. Nice composition and details. Thanks a lot for sharing.

Great closeup composition Laurent, and the separate OOF colors of the BG make it very different. Nice exposure and natural color of the subject, fine details :)
Very well done.
Howard

Hello Laurent,
Most of all I like the composition. Very sharp details and great colours. Remarkable colours in the BG. The DOF is fantastic.
Regards,
Peter

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1427 W: 128 N: 5241] (23187)
  • [2007-11-17 12:21]

Très réussie cette photo de Troglodyte il est mignon en effet, très beau background, image nette et excellent focus. Le Troglodyte est un oiseau assez rare ici. Bravo !

Mario

Hello Laurent,
Sorry I'm late here. I can't catch up the all critiques.
Anyway, I see the very beautiful shot of this little friend, with excellent details and POV here.
Also, lovely colours of BG and very nice composition.
Well presented and TFS,
Best wishes,
Kevin

Sorry I will be back later.

salut LOLO
TROGLODyTE ???? ben je ne connaissais pas, merci pour le lien
félicitations pour cette belle expo, les couleurs sont tres jolies et nettes, sur un bon bg
bon dimanche et encore bravo
edith

Bonjour Laurent, troglodyte mignon, il porte bien son nom, c'est un bel exploit de l'avoir immortalisé, ces satanés oiseaux ne tiennent pas en place, ils sont vifs et très méfiants, c'est une très belle photo avec un focus excellent et une profondeur de champs qui frôle la perfection,c'est vrai qu'en plus sa queue n'arrette pas de bouger.Le backgroung jaune et vert, bien qu'un peu choquant fait bien ressortir ce petit oiseau
bien joué Laurent,
amicalement,
Pat

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-11-18 15:50]

Hello Laurent

The flash of yellow in the BG makes a wonderful back drop for this wren.
The focus is sharp and the details show well.
Nicely composed in the frame,you have captured very good eye contact and catch light.
Very good POV and DOF.
TFS
Rob

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1811 W: 29 N: 5243] (17176)
  • [2007-11-19 1:29]

Hi Laurent,
Just marking this post wonderful post from you and will come back with a proper critique later.
Regards.
Sumon

Hello Laurent,
two really charming images! I love the way the little bird in the workshop is turning its back to us after the first encounter. A wonderful composition that makes very skilful use of the twigs to create a strong composition. Whatever the bright yellow colour in the background comes from - autumn leaves, I suppose - , it looks very good. Thank you!
With best regards,
Peter

Bonjour Laurent!
Comme tu disais... on va décréter le 20 novembre la «journée du Geai Bleu» :-)
Ton petit oiseau est simplement superbe! Malgré un arrière plan (MAGNIFIQUE ET SUPERBEMENT COLORÉ!!!) l'esposition et les détails de l'oiseau sont EXCELLENTS. Belle dynamique avec cette pose et la branche diagonale!
UNE SUPER RÉUSSITE... encore une fois :-)
Bravo et Merci!
Salutations du Québec... (il a commencé à neiger ici :-)

Claude

Excelente dominio de la composición Laurent y colores sorprendentes y agradables del fondo. El pájaro ??? : maravilloso. Como ustedes dicen::::: chapeau !!!

avec ce BG jaune, ça ressort très bien , bel effet
amicalement
jo

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