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Copyright: jonathan hart (jonathan_hart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 236 W: 4 N: 155] (1202)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-18
Categories: Insects
Exposure: f/4, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-12-02 2:30
Viewed: 577
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
again a bee story with a gaillardia flower
the picture you see is reframed and i used a little bit of noise reduction with neat image
a very flashy yellow if I can say !
in WS i show two other versions with different reframing, please if you want to help me to improve compositions, tell me what is the better version in your opinion

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Great composition and detail...lovely POV and DoF...I really like the way both bee and flower are in such good focus...nice one!!

Hello Jonathan,
I find n°2 the best one compo wise...
TFS
Annick

Bonjour Jonathan,

Une belle image de cette abeille qui butine la fleur, la photo a une bonne composition, netteté et de jolies couleurs. Bonne journée.

Pierre

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1904 W: 4 N: 5177] (19726)
  • [2007-12-02 8:53]

Hi Jonathan. Once again a very colourful close up of the bee. good detail and rich colours of the flower. a nice POV. well done TFS.#
Nick..

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  • mishe Gold Star Critiquer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 3] (655)
  • [2007-12-02 8:56]

Hi Jonathan!
Colors,compo and sharpness are excellent.
With best wishes,
Mishe.

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  • Adam73 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 5 N: 500] (2069)
  • [2007-12-02 10:13]

different pov but I like it. I like how the flower pedels flow right to the bee. Very pretty colors and nice details.

Salut Jonathan,
voila une composition intéressante et inhabituelle, très bonne macro, superbe couleur et mise au point irréprochable,
bravo c'est une excellente photo,
amicalement,
Pat

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  • demeve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 508 W: 8 N: 1077] (3976)
  • [2007-12-02 11:44]

Hello Jonathan,
Very nice macro, wonderful colors and details
great POV and composition.. Well done

Everton

Hello Jonathan, a creative composition with great summer colours. TFS best rgds, Necip.

Hello Jean-Christophe,
a most powerful, eye-catching, creative composition.
Looking at the other versions of cropping, I think the main image is the best choice. But the other versions are not bad at all, either.
Thank you! With best regards,
Peter

Hi Jonathan,

Super macro shot with a great level of detail and fantastic colours. In terms of the composition, I think that this version is good, but perhaps leaving in a little more of the image at the top and left-hand-side, to bring the insect into the image a little more, without losing that wondersul yellow, would have given a more classic composition.

Kind regards,

Mike

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 24 N: 4905] (15988)
  • [2007-12-02 19:22]

Hi Jonathan,
Just marking this wonderful post from you and will return with a proper critique later. Sorry, work pressure.
Regards.
Sumon

Hello Jonathan,
It 's a very colorful picture with good clarity, details and splendid colors.I liked the the different cmpositions you have tyried out. I liked this one and the altered image 1 best.
TFS,
Smitha.

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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2500 W: 132 N: 7109] (22209)
  • [2007-12-04 7:46]

Hello Jo,
This is an unusual and attractive composition where the honey bee follows the curve of the centre of the gaillardia while the petals radiate out into the image, as if the bee itself radiates energy here. The symbolism of this is easy to see.
Nice sharpness both of the bee and the flower.
Well done and thanks,
Ivan

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-12-04 8:52]

Hello Jonathan

I love the composition.The flower really makes a beautiful setting for this bee.
The flower radiating from the corner has wonderful colours.
Excellent focus and details.
The POV and DOF are well done.
TFS

Rob

re JO
super, beauté totale, couleurs géniales et bons détails dans l'abeille,
que dire de plus que magnifique??????
MERCI ET ENCORE BRAVO
EDITH

pt)

Allo Jonathan,
C'est une superbe composition, une des plus originales que j'ai vue. Les détails et couleurs sont superbes, bravo!
Claudine

Genial macro con unos detalles perfectos.
Buen encuadre y original PoV.
Saludos, JL.

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2991 W: 148 N: 4435] (14369)
  • [2007-12-09 0:55]

Hi Jonathan.
You see I like this flower and the same bee too. Excellent close-up with impressive cropping and nice colours. I also like all WS(s). Every of them reflects the same scene by own way. My best wishes and TFS.
Alexei.
P.S. Thanks for marking of my last picture as favorite. It is so pleasant for me.

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  • osse Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1029 W: 0 N: 90] (7661)
  • [2008-01-11 16:02]

Hi Jonathan
Nice shot and composition. Good colours, light, POV and details.
Well done MF

osse

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