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Le Soucis


Le Soucis
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Copyright: alain Herrault (alainh) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 50] (378)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-08-28
Categories: Insects
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/1002 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-08-16 9:30
Viewed: 1302
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Encore un papillon jaune. certainemnet un soucis ou Colias Croceus à moins que ce ne soit un soufré tres voisin. Il se delecte sur une scabieuse vieillissante. ce papillon a la facheuse tendance de "papilloner" et de ne s'arreter que quelques petites secondes.
Vercors 700m juillet 2004


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Nice one Alain,

It just like an 8 in his wing, very good yellow colour, the composition is nice but I think it can be cropped just a little.
I like it, very good job you did here.

Alain, the composition is very nice and also the colours. The angle is also nice. But sharpness is unfortunately lacking.
Greetings, Jan

  • Good 
  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2952 W: 367 N: 3779] (11765)
  • [2004-08-16 14:13]

Alain, I'm of the same opinion as Jan. The colours and composition are good but hte focus on the the butterfly is off and this brings attention to the background.

  • Great 
  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-08-16 15:36]

I like the composition and colors. After reading your note I realise that this guy is a mover and you had a very short window to take this shot - That explains why it is a bit soft on the focus. I still like it

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