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Sparrow
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Copyright: Christophe Berche (christophe) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 414 W: 61 N: 376] (1783)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-01-22
Categories: Birds
Camera: Olympus C-8080 WZ, Olympus TCON-14D
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/160 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-24 13:42
Viewed: 1297
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Taken photo to him park of the Chanteraines

Iso 160
F - stop 5
Speed 1/160
Aperture priority shooting opening

the Photo to a little noise, because of the distance and of the light lack, I modified the level therefore with Photoshop CS


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  • Good 
  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2951 W: 366 N: 3779] (11763)
  • [2005-01-24 16:19]

Hi Christophe, it's a nice capture but is a little dark and you have mentioned the noise. Have you tried NeatImage? It's a piece of software that allows you to remove noise. You can download a basic version for free. Good work.

We have the same camera, same problems Christophe. OK, Our biggest problem is the C8080's 5X optical range. Even with your 1.7 converter that's < than 10X. This means that to get on the ballpark with these small birds you will need to be < than 15 feet from the subject..I use seed & wait for them to come to me. Also, as I said before, the Olympus does very poorly in low-light as I'm sure you're finding out?? On the up-side, it's a great camera for macro work with a great lens & plenty of pixels!! Good luck!

  • Great 
  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2052 W: 315 N: 4301] (14719)
  • [2005-01-25 0:41]

J'aimerais bien faire un WS avec votre image mais j'ai déjà trop donné aujourd'hui, Christophe. Une autre fois peut-être!
Bonne composition et un excellent angle de prise de vue.
Bravo! et merci.

The POV is excellent. Thye focus is soft. There is a lot of noise and the glint in the eye is overdone. However Christophe, my critism is not to break you down but to help you do better next time. I suspect there was too much PP work. Otherwise, nice image. Well done

  • Good 
  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2816 W: 75 N: 7977] (26975)
  • [2005-01-25 4:23]

I agree with Willie in every word. Little too noisy, try to use software like Neat Image or Noise Ninja, Christophe!

I am afraid if you use NeatImage with a busy composition as this the results is not usually an improvement. Your enemy here is that of all photographers and it's lack of the right light. I suspect you used the on-camera flash (from the light in the eye) and not a proffesional flash. These on-camera flashes is hardly ever effective if not used close and indoors. The other factor is the ISO setting. I do not know if you had the camera on one of the automatic settings which forced it to choose a higher ISO rating. This looks like a ISO 800 or 1600 if the camera has that ability. I hope it helps for the future but without enough light and a high ISO all our photos would have this noise problem too.

  • Great 
  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1674 W: 5 N: 2130] (11898)
  • [2005-01-25 7:19]

Bon travail Christophe. Souvent on a pas toujours les conditions souhaité, quand on prend des photos nature. Merci pour l'envoi.

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