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Copyright: alin ma (alin-m) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 152 W: 1 N: 0] (565)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-19
Categories: Insects
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-04-21 6:30
Viewed: 424
Points: 4
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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 0 N: 507] (3040)
  • [2009-04-21 7:01]

Salut Alin !
Buna captura. Imi plac culorile foarte mult.
Iti doresc o zi buna,
Adrian

Hello Alin,

This is a good shot of the caterpillar with fine details of its patterns and textures. The hairy leaf is also nicely detailed.

IMO there is a lot of empty space, which if cropped, would bring the caterpillar closer to the viewer. Also, just a little sharpening really improves your caterpillar.

I have done a w/s to show what I mean.
I hope that you like the changes and are not offended by the alterations to your photograph.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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