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Copyright: Reina Heuven (reina) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 260 W: 1 N: 328] (2024)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-22
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-17 15:58
Viewed: 1211
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 44
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Dear Trek friends, Since my hollidays around christmas I didnt manage too post on a regular basis. I'm trying to put all my lessons I learned in practice (yesterday early in the morning when there was a great sunrise I tried to take pictures of flying birds, succeeded, but not good enough). I'm still puzzling, and practicing for my trip and hope to go well equiped to South Africa where for sure there must be plenty time to practice.
In the mean while some warming shots of june....
Its probably a bit over lighted.
I hope new feedback of you guys. Photography tips around cape town are very welcome.
Reina

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To marhowie: cropreina 3 02-05 12:52
To Nico: 600!reina 3 01-31 17:04
To livios: workshopreina 1 01-23 16:19
To Robespierre: uit de oude doos....reina 1 01-17 17:57
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Hi Reina,
it's sooooo cute, I love your little dug.
The drops are wonderful.
Sharpness could be a little better, anyway a lovely post, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hi Reina,
Good detail, colours and sharpness.
Composition and exposure are good. Good POV and framing.
Thanks for posting, Have a great week.

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  • Active Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 113 W: 6 N: 19] (1231)
  • [2006-01-17 16:23]

cute :)
good POV :)
nicely captured.
TFS
Barbara

Hi Reina,
Ook maar eentje uit de oude doos? Het is een goed uitgesneden portret geworden. Het kopje mooi scherp. Met f/8 of wellicht f/11 zou de scherptediepte denk ik wat verder doorlopen. Theoretisch was het mogelijk geweest, gelet op je snelle sluitertijd van 1/1000 sec. Maar ja, de praktijk is anders. In ieder geval heel mooi gelukt.
Complimenten, Ruud

Hi Reina,
I really like the frame filling composition. Soft direct sunlight looks good. Detail is excellent, but I think your DOF needed to be greater. Head areas is sharp, but end of bill goes soft as it falls off in the DOF. The water droplets look great, and this has a high cutness factor going on.
Scott

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  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2006-01-18 2:03]

What a nice portrait that you have well done ! Sharpness is a bit soft... I also appreciate the complementary note... Congratulations Reina and thanks for sharing.

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  • Dando Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 637 W: 32 N: 792] (3084)
  • [2006-01-18 6:00]

Nice close up. Love the texture of the feathers and the water, well captured. TFS.
Dean.

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  • moemf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 0 N: 160] (701)
  • [2006-01-18 8:18]

Hi Reina

Excellent shot. He's very cute. The detail and POV are great. I think the light adds to the shot. Very nice!

TFS

Reinier

P.S. Around C.T. you have Table Mountain for shots (rock dassie, birds, insects, flowers, etc.), Robben Island (lowers, penguins, seals, possibly dolphins), Winelands, Sunsets from the mountain or beaches.

Excellent closeup. Cutest shot I've seen in a long time. Great detail and I like the composition a lot.

Nicely done

He or she is soo cute. I like the waterdrops on the feathers. It needs a little bit of sharpness but otherwise it is nice. Well done.

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  • klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)
  • [2006-01-18 17:09]

Good shot, lovely tight compo and CUTE. The reflection on the beak is OE, a polfilter might have helped at the expense of an f/stop or so. Well done!
Regards,
Gabi

Cute little duckling the POV is perfect for this kind of a shot. Ninely done Reina. ;)

This is a well composed mugshot Reina. Good detail, POV & eye contact. How much did you crop this image? As you may already know, over-cropping will degrade the viewable image significantly.
Overall a great post.
Thank You!

Hi Reina,
Very good shot with excellent detail,
great colour and nice framing.
Thanks for sharing!

Hi, Reina.
Very cute bird portrait. Composition is nice. The only thing is lack of some sharpness. But the thing that it's strongly cropped as you have written, explains the thing.

Hi Reina,
Cute shot. Love the water droplets and the soft colours. I think I might have shot this around f8 as you obviously had plenty of light. Also, I wonder if a slight puff of fill flash might have evened out the shadows a bit.
Thanks
Paul

Ja ... hello Reina , tu as surement bougé ! c'est un peux trouble dommage
Didou

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2233 W: 188 N: 1929] (8127)
  • [2006-01-22 19:05]

Beautiful shot, very sharp Details and a excellent light.
Regards..SkyF

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2156 W: 322 N: 4258] (16906)
  • [2006-01-23 12:11]
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Reina, I'd try to add some more sharpness to the picture.

Apart from that, a very nice capture with great pov, bg and dof.

The droplets are a great bonus.

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 755 W: 31 N: 20] (5032)
  • [2006-01-25 12:28]

Hi Reina,
very nice portrait. Good colours and composition. Well done.
Rgs, Aleksander

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2006-01-26 17:00]

Hello Reina, this is a nice close up...did you crop it much? It is a little soft in focus but it has a nice effect. It's a good shot. Well done.

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  • Nico Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 1 N: 332] (1313)
  • [2006-01-30 2:36]
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Baie mooi foto van eend. Smiley tomorrow.

Hi Reina!
Sweet and nice! great portrait. Good colors and shot. Well done and TFS ;-)
best regards
Dorota

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