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Blue one with bonus


Blue one with bonus
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Copyright: jaap polak (carper) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2167 W: 124 N: 2567] (8208)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-08
Categories: Insects
Camera: Fujifilm Finepix S7000
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): my best 25 photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-03-11 10:44
Viewed: 1579
Points: 72
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It is one of the most common butterflies in Europe. The males are a striking bluish-violet colour, but females are brown with orange spots near the margins of the wings. In both sexes, the undersides of the wings are greyish brown with blackish spots and orange crescents towards the margins of the wings . The caterpillar has a stout body, which tapers towards the tips. The head is black and the body is green. A darker green line bordered with white passes along the centre of the back. There is also a whitish-green line along the sides . This part is from here

Well here is my favourite butterfly. First I have to say that I bought a new camera special for the macro shots. The result of the fuji finpix 700 is a very nice one, but perfectionist I am, I want some better. So I bought the canon powershot pro 1. Same camera as Livio on this site. I know that I must do the best I have to made better shots then before. But I am sure that I can do it and I shall do it. Thats a promise. I hope you like this one, with my old camera. The only thing I don't like on it is the use of Neat here, I know it is with noise ore without noise.

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To pgmoni: the link does not work for me.carper 1 03-11 11:15
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  • puciu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 523 W: 0 N: 16] (2599)
  • [2005-03-11 10:55]

Excellent macro, good shot.
Perfect sharpness, pretty composition.
I greet , Robert.

Perfect shot with bonus!I've posted a ws cropping your bonus:)Hope you'll like it...Beautiful macro,perfect details of this butterfly

Wow, this is a good one. Sharp and well lighted . Overall, your intention to get the fly in it might have spoiled a bit the composition, but that is just IMHO.
BTW the link does not work for me. Which blue is this ?

Jaap this is probably my favourite butterfly too. You bonus fly in my opinion doesn't do anything to improve the composition of this shot. The detail and colour of the blue are very nice.

Very good Jaap.
It'sa one of my fav's too.
Very good colours and details. I'm agree with the others about the composition. IMO Sebnem did a nice WS.
Well done, my friend.

I'm waiting for pictures taken with your new "toy".

Beautifull colours !! the blue against the yellow works well

groetjes
Elize

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  • Kris Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 0 N: 129] (1806)
  • [2005-03-11 12:11]

Very nice photo, Jaap - perfect details and colours.
Regards.

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  • Midi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 27 N: 184] (2417)
  • [2005-03-11 12:13]

I like this blue butterfly (never seen in our region) excellent macro shot.

Very nice macro Jaap!
POV and composition are excellent!
Sharpness, details and DOF are fine!
IMO, the fly take too much attention.

TFS! Good work.

Hi Jaap,
Great shot. The buterfly is fantastic. I would have crop the left side closer to the fly, but it is a detail
Guy

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  • IdoTT Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 19 N: 86] (482)
  • [2005-03-11 13:43]

Good one Jaap!:)
This is a great photo a great comp and great colors!
The fly adds a lot in this picture!
You cought a great moment!

WellDone!

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 788 W: 31 N: 20] (4996)
  • [2005-03-11 13:48]

Hi Jaap!
Beautiful butterfly and excellent picture. Nice colours, good sharpness, interesting note. Well done.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 144 N: 5796] (17179)
  • [2005-03-11 14:45]

Beautiful macro shot Jaap. And I look forward to seeing your results with the new camera. And you've even caught a fly too. Well done.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2964 W: 366 N: 3848] (11751)
  • [2005-03-11 15:00]

Hi Jaap, great shot. Lovely colours and composition. I can't wait for summer and the appearance of these creatures. Very well done.

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  • honza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 0 N: 680] (4047)
  • [2005-03-11 15:40]

Nice butterfly with perfect sharpness and colors. Funny title and good note. Well done Jaap.

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  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 4 N: 780] (2762)
  • [2005-03-11 16:00]

Three in one, a flower, a fly and a butterfly. You have done well Jaap, great colours, POV and clarity.
Thanks for sharing.

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 164 W: 48 N: 332] (2764)
  • [2005-03-11 16:21]

He Jaap,

Zitten rommelen met photoshop? Je gelooft het bijna niet dat dit de echte natuurlijke kleuren zijn.
Noemen we dit niet blauwtje?
Die vlieg onderaan doet het ook goed.

Bedankt,

hendrik

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2801 W: 75 N: 7845] (26257)
  • [2005-03-11 16:44]

Amazing shot Jaap! I like vivid colours and composition. Blue butterfly looks great on yellow flowers. And you've got domestic fly as a bonus ;-)

This is really a very good capture Jaap. Almost perfect dof (only the edge of the right fore-wing is just dropping out of focus - just teasing, it is not important in this beautiful capture). The colours are perfect - especially I like the complementary blue/yellow. Personally I would crop out the lower part with the fly but that is not really important either.

Great shot, Jaap. What I like particularly is the neat, detailed texture of the blue. Just fantastic. And I respect your intent of presenting us a bonus fly. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent photo. However I am in agreement with some of the others that the fly does not blend in well here. How lucky for you to be able to see such sights as this. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  • radz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 601 W: 11 N: 599] (3161)
  • [2005-03-12 1:33]

Wonderful colour,minus fly it would have been great composition.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 177] (622)
  • [2005-03-12 2:53]

Goedemorgen Jaap,
Opnieuw zo'n juweeltje, en eens in een totaal andere houding, bevalt mij wel op deze manier, en twee op een foto is zo wie zo al uitzonderlijk, echt mooi werk Jaap, hier hou ik van!
Groeten,
John.

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  • sAner Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1654 W: 79 N: 1456] (4742)
  • [2005-03-12 3:40]

The butterfly is perfect Jaap and the colors are magnificent. I agree with Wideload that the bonus (= the fly) doesn't add to the composition and that's why I would have cropped it. I would have also cropped the OOF flowers on the left as they distract a little. Returning to the butterfly: the details are really very good and you've captured her so well! TFS! The note is very good too!

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1676 W: 5 N: 2144] (11866)
  • [2005-03-12 8:05]

Belle photo, avec une bonne lumière un beau sécimen ce papion. J'aurais peut-être coupé la photo à gauche pour enlever les fleurs jaunes surexposé et trop flou. J'aurais enlevé aussi la mouche qui n'ai pas nette en bas et laissé un peut d'espace devant le papion.

Félictations pour l'envoi et bonne journée.

Composition:****
Technical quality:****
Wow factor:****
Personality:*****

Nice shot, I just find the fly a bit distracting.
Well done.
TFS.

Beautiful photo! I can never get a clear closeup photo. You have great composition with the yellow flowers, blue butterfly and even the fly at the bottom. Great focus and amazing details. I can see the "hairs" on the wings of this butterfly!

Jaap my vrien
Hiedie bly altyd 'n pragtige vlinder, met mooi metaal blou in die vlerke. Mooi POV en goeie dof.

Pragtig!

"beauty and the beast!" (..or shitfly. :)) Exceptional compositiona and contrasting colours Jaap. Tack sharp. I enjoy your macro work. I here you got a new toy? When can we expect to see it in action?

Very well done.

What a great photo! i like this composition fly & butterfly.. very nice colours and sharpness, great dof & pov, the blue butterfly is really wonderfull,

You did a great Photo Jaap,

Regards,

I love the contrast of the blue with the yellow flowers. You can almost count the little fuzzies on this butterfly. I find the "other" fly annoying, but then I've never seen a fly yet that wasn't annoying me! WEll done, wish I could take such nice close-ups.

The soft blue vlinder and the yellow colours of the flower makes this a nice mood for the coming spring...
And that little bonus, that's just funny !

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 316 N: 4403] (14711)
  • [2005-03-20 10:19]

Common for you but exotic for us, Jaap.
Great composition includind a bonus.
An excellent picture.
Thanks.

To me, this is the most delicate butterfly in terms of soft colors. You've done a very good job in keeping this delicacy intact. Very good color palette of blues, softness of body silks and color combination with yellow and green. The fly? I won't be original in suggesting you crop just above it for a better framing. Very nice shot, Jaap!

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3065 W: 231 N: 5834] (19602)
  • [2005-03-30 3:22]

The blue of the butterfly and the yellow of the flowers are stunning together. Excellent macro detail. The fly is a bit distracting. Great photo!

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  • ddg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 880 W: 23 N: 926] (4989)
  • [2005-04-29 6:09]

Félicitations Jaap pour ce papillon bleu qui se detache parfaitement sur ces fleurs que je pense etre des achillées. Beau piqué et bravo. Didier.

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  • RII Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 475 W: 0 N: 853] (2690)
  • [2006-02-14 15:58]

Hi Jaap.
Excellent composition ,the butterfly and the fly, very nice colors, good macro.
Saludos...RICARDO.

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