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Dandelions along the coast of Jaeren with a towering cumulus in the background.
The flowery meadow and the blue sky is divided by a stone wall, which there is a lot of in this area. Some of them are actually protected. |
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| To Anton: Hi Anton | JoeyNO |
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07-05 14:52 |
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Joar,
This is a beautiful minimalist landscape in which you have a limited number of colors, with a simple design. The title is also fitting. I think you handled the exposure very well. The colour saturation is fine and the details are nice and sharp, due to the small aperture which provided you with perfect DOF. You have perfectly nailed the focus.
The composition is great giving us a wonderful sense of this vast landscape. One small visible nit is the fact you have placed the horison too much in the middle. If I may suggest however, I think it would have been even more impressive if you showed a bit less of the sky without losing the cloud. To show you what I mean, I made a few changes and posted it in workshop. Hope you enjoy.
Please note that this critique is not done because there are any real negative aspects about this photo. The photo is absolutely great, but I am merely mentioning these points that could, in my subjective opinion, improve this shot even more.
I looked at your galary and think you have beautiful pictures.
Friendly regards
Anton
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A nice simple shot it needs nothing more to show it's beauty. I like the simplicity of this composition. Lovely
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