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Copyright: Arie van Elst (herkingen) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 3] (147)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-08
Categories: Mountain
Camera: Canon Ixus 950 IS
Exposure: f/8, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-20 8:58
Viewed: 787
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Beautiful view of Norwegian landscape!
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Hi Arie,

This is a nice open area and I can tell from your note that you were impressed with it. Your photo however doesn't have the impact that would convey that message. The tonality is very flat. Perhaps had you put something closer in the foreground... the rocks, or flowers for example would give more scale to the scene. Sometimes "less is more"... come in closer on some element for a focal point or look for lines that would lead the viewer into the scene. Look at lots of photographs to see what kind of compositions appeal to you.

TFS
Evelynn : )

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