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Young Swallows


Young Swallows
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Copyright: Pawel Szady (slimalien) (5)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-13
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-13 13:20
Viewed: 295
Points: 5
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Swallows from my garage.
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Excellent clarity. I wish I could see more of their nest. The construction is amazing. I'm guessing these are Barn Swallows if they're in your garage. LOL Good framing and nice lighting on this shot as well. TFS Trevor

Hi Pawel,

Welcome on TN!
You're capturing well these lovely swallows in the nest.
The focus is suitable, and it's good on the contrast between clear foreground and blur background. If I say the desire technically a little, it's better to suppress entire black tone and crop the top and bottom a bit for drawing out swallows more. I tried a worshop, yet this is my personal taste and I hope tha you don't mind.

Thanks for sharing!

Regards,
mikio

Hello Pawel
very beautiful shot of this Barn Swallows from your Garage
you have taken this image with very fine details and natural colors
I like it very much TFS and great WE
Jacqueline

P.S. : welcome on TN

Hello Pawel

Nice capture...
I guess there was some scope to further improve the POV and lighting...

A good job overall....
cheers...

regards
vipin :-)

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