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With mother else


With mother else
Photo Information
Copyright: Roman Kozlowski (bimbol) (8)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-02
Categories: River
Camera: Pentacon SIX TL, Biometar 2.8/80mm, Agfa color 100
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-06 13:25
Viewed: 1039
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Łabędzie na rzeze Bóbr. Ptaki jak ptaki, ale spodobała mi sie obraz malowany przez nurt wody.
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  • Good 
  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 4 N: 780] (2762)
  • [2005-03-06 16:02]

Welcome to Trek Nature Roman, a good first post but it could be improved with a little adjustment. There is a lot of space behind the swans, much better to have space in front of the subject.

Welcome to TN!
I am with the former critique and I want to add, there is a little bit lack of sharpness and the bushes in the front are distracting and catching the viewer eye.

  • Great 
  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 316 N: 4403] (14711)
  • [2005-03-06 22:44]

A good first performance, Roman.
Nice composition and point of view.

I wish you the most cordial welcome on TN.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing.

Nice first post Roman.
Good POV and colours.
I'm agree with Michael about the space, now it looks they are swimming out of the picture and it's little soft but anyway its a nice picture.
Well done.
Welcome to TN.

Nice photo Roman.

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