My lake

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• Naturewalk (1125)
• [2006-10-15 20:40]
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Hi Adalberto, Welcome to TrekNature (TN).
Nice shot for your first picture. Exposure is good, as well for the contrast. Good deapt of field (DOF). Nice reflection on the water too. My critique here is that in my opinion, the sky takes almost the top half of the picture and that is to much. Your subject here is the river and the trees. Try next time to frame your main subject as to fill most of the picture.

Here is another tip for starters on TN : Always give us an note on how and why you take a picture, what as inspired you to take it, what did you do in Workshop before posting etc...
This way it will be helpfull for us to give a more precise critique.

PC :)

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• fyapici (6130)
• [2006-10-15 23:01]
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Hi Adalberto.
Welcome to TrekNature.
I agree with Patrick (Naturewalk) and I don't want to repeat same words. He told all things (Thanks Patrick.)
I sign too for note. It is very important and we want to know for example, where is this lake, why went you there, waht did you do after taking, before posting on this photo?
Greetings
Fevzi

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• saeedabbasi (4288)
• [2006-11-22 0:14]

Hi dear Adalberto ,
what this photo is very nice ! it has very nice colors and fresh .
i like it so much. i like to be there.
thanks
Saeed