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The swan


The swan
Photo Information
Copyright: Astrid Koszarek (tellerka) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 0 N: 20] (521)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-19
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D100, Sigma 180 Macro
Exposure: f/11, 1/1000 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-12-19 11:05
Viewed: 1162
Points: 5
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  • Great 
  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1023 W: 61 N: 648] (2083)
  • [2004-12-19 11:53]

Very nice shot Astrid. Some notes would be useful. The workshop does the picture justice. Well done to all

  • Good 
  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2705 W: 74 N: 8864] (30243)
  • [2004-12-20 4:14]

Very good quality but something is wrong with composition in my opinio. I like Philip's WS. Maybe cropping left side with ducks could be good idea, too? I don't know :-) Nice light and reflection in on the water.
One point this time :-)

Composition: ****
Sharpness: ***
Color: ***
DOF: ***
POV: ****
Note: NR

That's a nice shot but it need to be improved (it's very dark), so I hope you don't mind but I tried a WS.

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