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Copyright: Slawek Chudy (chudy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 0 N: 90] (495)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-14
Categories: Flowers
Camera: SONY DSC-H10, Carl Zeiss Vario-Tessar 3,5-4,4/6,3-63
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-19 14:23
Viewed: 360
Points: 4
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Excellent detail. A beautyfull colours and interesting composition.
Congratulations !!!

Hy Slawek
Nice colage with your spring flowers.But, If you don't mind, I would suggest to you to try to arange the pictures without beeing one on top of the other. I mean, you have a beautiful anemone or hepatica, but both are "cutted" by the corners of the galanthus flower. Try, and you will see the results!
All the best, Oana
PS1: Waiting for new pictures, we are in full summer!
PS2: I would not rank this picture, I will wait for a rearrangement of the pictures. It simple to do that in Picassa.

LG: Anemone ranunculoides
PG: Ficaria verna
LD: Anemone nemorosa
PD: Hepatica nobilis
środek: wygląda jak jakiś pokręcony śniedek Ornithogallum sp.

Piękny zestaw geofitów wiosennych, pozdrawiam!

Witaj Slawek,

The idea of doing such a collage itself isn't bad, but You should have been a bit more careful when placing the main image into the pic, because the two lower flowers became hidden, therefore the whole collage didn't become pleasant to the viewers' eyes. A pity. Contrast is too few on the main and the top left photo.

Unfortunately, at least to me, not Your best post, due to the image on the center, which was placed without a real conception. The typical case of "less would have been more".

Best regards from Hungary, Wladyslaw

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