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sparrow
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Copyright: Pawel Chmur (cloud) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 60 N: 206] (1831)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-05
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon Rebel EOS 300D
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-05 14:20
Viewed: 408
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This sparrow just fly for the first time and is very concerned.
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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2597 W: 133 N: 7441] (23193)
  • [2007-05-05 15:46]

Hello Pawel,
Fine capture of a young House Sparrow showing a fine pose. Though this may be cropped a little too close, it is a good sharp shot set in a pleasing compo.
TFS and best wishes, Ivan

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 242 N: 5560] (19685)
  • [2007-05-05 16:12]

Hi Pawel,
decent shot of this small bird.
TFS Joey

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  • trinko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 610 W: 83 N: 324] (4310)
  • [2007-05-05 16:59]

nice focus good pose by the bird. i'd increase contrast to make the colors stand out more. increased saturation would also probably be nice.

Witam Pawle!
Bardzo przyzwoita fotka z dobra kompozycja, interesujacym ujeciem i ciepla kolorystyka :)
Jedyne co mogloby byc troche lepsze to glebia strosci, ktora w obecnej sytuacji nie chwyta wrobla w calosci. Ale i tak mi sie zdjecie podoba :)
Pozdrawiam zyczac milego popoludnia!
Radek

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