flying high

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• petrudamsa (2474)
• [2005-11-27 11:48]
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Yes, this is much clear and focused. Composition is artistic indeed. About the noise, don't worry for now. You'll get it right when you'll have some editing program. For info, I think that Mike did a good job in Workshop.

Regards, Petru

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• L810th (0)
• [2005-11-27 12:43]
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Hi! Arthur,
This is a great capture of three stages of flight and composed so well. I did a WS to remove the slight noise in the sky so that the feather texture could stand out against the smooth blue colour. Well done indeed and TFS!
Mike.

PS. Forgive my manners "Welcome to Trek world" where you cannot escape from;>)

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• klemmg (1719)
• [2005-11-27 14:14]
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Hi Artur,
OUTSTANDING composition with these three, most in-flight shots will not give you much idea of depth, here the different size provide the 3D effect. I particularly like the diagonal starting top left down to the bird in front to bottom right, and then "bouncing off" towards top right in direction of flight of the front bird.
Also a lot of action with the different postures in the birds.
The noise or grain you had mentioned, and not much detail: I suppose this is a crop from a larger original, so you would hit the borders of resolution here. Other reason might be if it was not completely in focus, which happens to a lot of my in-flights, as neither me nor my autofocus seems to be fast enough.
As is, a very good picture with lots of visual impact!
Regards,
Gabi
P.S.: Welcome to TN, be careful it is addictive ;-)

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• thistle (9272)
• [2005-11-28 4:06]
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Czesc Artur :)
Troche dziwnie zaczales przygode z TN, bo jak sie pewnie przekonasz, zdjecia martwych zwierzat nie sa tu szczegolnie popularne.
No wiesz, pelno tu milosnikow przyrody ;)
Ale teraz jest juz dobrze. Ptaki w locie to dosc trudny temat, ale efekty sa zawsze bardzo interesujace.
To zdjecie jest swietnie skomponowane i ma niezla jakosc.
Witaj na TN :)

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• blue-velvet29 (912)
• [2005-12-05 16:26]
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Witaj ;-)
Ladna kompozycja, sliczny, nasycony kolor nieba.
pozdrawiam
Dorota