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Copyright: Barbara Maria (Active) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 113 W: 6 N: 19] (1231)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-20
Categories: Flowers
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-29 5:32
Viewed: 820
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
somewhere in Bedomin
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  • jlynx Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 77 W: 9 N: 34] (368)
  • [2005-11-29 6:28]

Witaj Basiu,
Oj dobrze, że nie rozmyłaś całkowicie tła. Dzieki takiej głębi ostrości jak teraz świetnie pasuje tytuł pod fotografią. Lubię takie zdjęcia za ich naturalność. Tak umieszczona w kadrze roślinka jakby chciała powiedzieć: "patrzcie, ja rzeczywiście jestem sama..." Ładne i nieco nostalgiczne.
Pozdrawiam serdecznie,
Jerzy

Czesc,
Bardzo ladne ujecie. Troszke szkoda, ze kwiatostan babki zachodzi na drzewo w tle ale poza tym ladna kompozycja i swiatlo.
Serdecznosci,
Michal

Hello Barbara,
Nice composition... Good DOF and colours! Well done...
Regards,
Pablo -

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2705 W: 74 N: 8864] (30243)
  • [2005-11-29 7:32]
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Hi Barbara!

Few advices - I think background should be more blurred, horizon more horizontal ;-) and close-up more close ;-) Not bad, but also not your best. I hope you don't mind, I just tried to help.
I took similiar subject some time ago - look here - http://www.treknature.com/gallery/Europe/Poland/photo9447.htm

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  • sgo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 137 W: 32 N: 239] (718)
  • [2005-11-29 8:04]

Hi Barbara,
I kind of like your lonley Plantago lanceolata and sympathize with your pensive approach to it (we had a lonely Plantago media a just few days ago...). You could experiment with applying some lens blur to it as Michal suggests, but I think the landscape horizon looks o.k. and the slightly slanting stalk, well, that's what gives it that little coy look. (If you permit Workshop, people on TN could offer concrete suggestions),
Goran

Sliczna fotka!
Swietny pomysl i wykonanie. Fajnie, ze widac krajobraz w tle.
Bardzo mi sie podoba :)

Nice BG, the focus blur is very nice, making a good 3D effect with the main subject well detailed.
Nice view, thanks for sharing.

Excellent shot. I really like the composition, the foreground plant makes it really ineteresting and the background has nice lines in it.

Well captured

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