Butterfly

Critiques [Translate]

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• elroyie (6403)
• [2004-08-07 11:04]
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The butterfly is very beautiful and you got very good colours but there are few things like:
1. I don't think that centering the object in this case is very atractive.
2. The subject is 'vanished' in the background, there too many details around the subject.

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• alainh (378)
• [2004-08-07 15:17]
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bonjour Valter.
tres joli papillon que j'aimerais pouvoir photographier un jour, il s'agit certainement du "feston d'Espagne" ou Zerynthia rumina.
un peu trop centré, les couleurs sont superbes.
bien vu
alain

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• milloup (1706)
• [2004-08-07 17:44]
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I agree with Elroye's comments with the addition that a note telling us more about what we're seeing would be nice. Which kind of butterfly is this, for instance?

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• RAP (7405)
• [2004-08-07 18:12]
• [2] - [workshop] [compare]

Bella captura Valter.
Buena iluminacion solar permite apreciar correctamente el insecto.
Los colores son un poco palidos y la nitidez podria mejorarse.
Buen intento!
Me atreví a realizar un trabajo... espero sea de tu agrado.

Beauty capture Valter.
Good solar illumination allows to appreciate the insect correctly.
The colors are a little pale and the clearness could improve.
Good attempt!
I dared to make a workshop... I hope you like it.

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• PDP (11769)
• [2004-08-08 8:24]
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She's a beaut Valter, superb colour and detail, I wis hthe crop were tighter as the sourroundings are distracting attention. I like Ricardos workshop although it loses the yellow hues.

I'm pretty sure the ID of this is is a Spanish Festoon Zerynthia rumina. I can't see enough detail as the above species should havve a clear window near the wing tip.

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• phlr (2814)
• [2005-06-11 11:50]

Great shot of a very beautiful butterfly!
The Zerynthia rumina it's also common where I live (Castelo Branco, Portugal).