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The tiny gang


The tiny gang
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Copyright: TOMESCU Cezar Valentin (tomcezar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 195 W: 0 N: 258] (1631)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-26
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 350 D, Canon EF 80-200 1:4.5-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-01-30 1:15
Viewed: 840
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Passer montanus

The Tree Sparrow, Passer montanus, breeds over most of Europe and Siberia, and allied forms occur in other parts of Asia. It has been introduced to Australia, and the United States (where it is known as the Eurasian Tree Sparrow or German Sparrow to differentiate it from the native, unrelated American Tree Sparrow), where German immigrants introduced it to the area around St. Louis in the 1870s. From there, it has slowly expanded its range into Illinois and Missouri. Changes in farming methods have meant that this species is declining in some parts of western Europe.

With 200mm and teleconvertor 2x, in the hand.

I know, the sharpness is not good.
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To rkailas: Hi Ravi.tomcezar 1 01-30 22:15
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  • Great 
  • pvs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1168 W: 261 N: 3035] (13835)
  • [2008-01-30 1:30]

Hi Tomescu,

Maybe the sharpness is not at the best,but I like the composition of this family,well seen and tfs

Paul

  • Great 
  • inked Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 0 N: 248] (769)
  • [2008-01-30 1:32]

hi Tomescu,
i agree with Paul, the sharpness isn't the best but the composition is really nice. well captured group of sparrows. thanks for sharing

Nice composition of a very cute group.

Hi Tomescu

Very well seen! As you say it lacks a little sharpness and the colors appear a tad dull. I have done a very simple WS on it - hope you like it.

TFS and Best
Ravi

  • Great 
  • crs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 523 W: 0 N: 920] (3543)
  • [2008-01-30 5:13]

Buna Cezar,

Foarte interesanta fotografie. Modul in care ai reusit sa prinzi grupul de vrabii este remarcabil. Lumina este buna si culorile naturale. Poate mai multa claritate ar fi fost binevenita.

Toate cele bune,
Cristian

  • Great 
  • Dan Gold Star Critiquer [C: 113 W: 0 N: 2] (18)
  • [2008-01-30 8:08]

Buna ziua Cezar,

o compozitie foarte reusita cu "moshulicii" la sfat. Din cate am vazut eu, vrabiile au obiceiul sa se adune cam in aceleasi locuri.
Poate vei reusi o "reluare" cu un sharp mai bun. este foarte bine ca ai postat aceasta poza ca nu ebine sa dai vrabia din mana pe....
Succes, Dan

  • Great 
  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3596 W: 143 N: 5696] (18621)
  • [2008-01-30 9:35]

Hi Cezar.
What a great charming scene. I like it a lot. Excellent POV and "right" composition. I like precise DOF. All scene is in focus and BG is blurred amazingly. Some softness of the image is not a point. My best wishes.
Alexei.

  • Good 
  • cako Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 545 W: 0 N: 735] (3213)
  • [2008-01-30 11:20]

Hi Tomescu
very good composition
have a nice day

Hello Tomescu,
Very good composition and point of view, could be a bit sharper. i did a workshop.
Angela

Hi Tomescu,
Great candid shot. A bit less in sharpness, but very good composition and POV. Thanks for sharing.
- Nirmal

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