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wild yellow flower II


wild yellow flower II
Photo Information
Copyright: juan jose munoz (juanjo) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 167 W: 8 N: 27] (1142)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-18
Categories: Flowers
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikon AF-S VR 105mm 2.8G IF-ED Micro
Exposure: f/8, 1/80 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-23 16:59
Viewed: 917
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this a macro picture taken very close of this yellow flower with red lines

the POF is not very large ,b ut we can see the details
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To fragman: hello Orijuanjo 1 04-25 16:55
To cedryk: hello Michaljuanjo 1 04-25 16:47
To Alex99: hello Alexeijuanjo 1 04-25 16:34
To marmottelolo: bonjour Laurentjuanjo 1 04-25 16:28
To marjan: hello Marjanjuanjo 1 04-25 16:23
To SkyF: hello Skyjuanjo 1 04-25 16:09
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nice Ononis natrix, its a pitty it is cut on top. greetings Ori

Hello Juan,
It's a very nice shot for the colours and the close-up, however the DOF is a bit to shallow. Also the framing could be abit more up to include the whole flower. Anyway, amazing details make this contribution very nice.
Best greetings,
Michal

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2921 W: 34 N: 8658] (32266)
  • [2007-04-23 17:08]

Hi Juan. This is a very good macro shot of the flower. very good colour and fine detail. with a good DOF. TFs well done,
Nick

Hola Juan,
Imagen muy estética. Colores encantadores. Pozo hecho.

BL

Hi Juan.
You are right. The DOF is shallow a bit. In this case it is necessary to increase the subject distance. DOF will be larger and then to use a crop. However, focus is correct, colour palette is amazing as well as POV. My best wishes and TFS.
Alexei.

bonjour juan josé
jolies couleur et motifs sur cette fleur,je regrette seulement que vous ayez coupé le haut.
laurent

hi juan, wonderful shot with exceletn motive and composition.
Marjan

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2233 W: 188 N: 1929] (8127)
  • [2007-04-24 16:18]
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Hello Juan Jose,
ah there is this wonderful flower again, this time you used a very shallow DOF. I like this a lot it fdoes give this composition an artistic touch. Very well done.
Sky

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