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I want to eat...


I want to eat...
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Copyright: VICMA CS (Juyona) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2102 W: 6 N: 2113] (13565)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-04
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-04 16:27
Viewed: 666
Points: 92
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Now the garden is full with these cheerful birds,
always with desires of eating, their parents have to make hours extras to feed them.
I wait they like it
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  • delic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 530 W: 6 N: 340] (936)
  • [2007-04-04 16:43]

Hello Vicma,
Nice pose of this little bird. Excellent focus, depth of field and background. I'm not sure but NR may be overdone.
Best wishes,
Hakan

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2129 W: 9 N: 5957] (22516)
  • [2007-04-04 16:54]

Hi Vicma, Great shot of the little bird, lots of detail and colour. good timing to get his beak open. well done.
Nick

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  • Zeno Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 475 W: 0 N: 926] (7979)
  • [2007-04-04 17:00]

Hi Vicma,

Great portrait of this lovely bird. Sharpness, details and colors are super. Congrats.

regards,
Zeno.

Fabuloso.
Muy nítida y bastante acertado el encuadre así como la exposición.
Gran dominio de la luz.
Saludos, JL.

Hi Horia, wonderful little hungry bird with lovely blurry BG, splendid colors, excellent sharpness, great details, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hola Vicma,
Con poca paciencia se le ve a este pichón!
Muy buena la foto y la expresión capturada en el ave.
Me gusta el punto de vista, la pose, y la profundidad de campo utilizada, lograste un fondo difuso que resalta lo mejor del pájaro.
Excelente también la textura del tronco donde se encuentra posado.
Enhorabuena y gracias por compartir la foto.
Un gran saludo,
JM

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  • lgfoto Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 16 N: 286] (1466)
  • [2007-04-04 17:32]

Lovely shot Vicma. Nice timing, great DOF and sharp head and very good composition,TFS.

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  • Hil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 750 W: 11 N: 1442] (4951)
  • [2007-04-04 17:36]

Hi Vicma,

Great shot of this youngster, nicely composed shot with a superb pose with the little guy gaping for food, very nice feather detail and great colours too.

TFS Hilary :o)

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  • jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1836 W: 94 N: 2340] (8406)
  • [2007-04-04 18:03]

Hola Víctor,
Expresiva cara la de este pajarito y muy buena la toma, con unos colores precioso y un fondo a juego muy bueno.
Saludos, José M.

Fabuloso.
Muy nítida y bastante acertado el encuadre así como la exposición.
Gran dominio de la luz.
Saludos.
Angelo

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-04-04 20:44]

Hello Vicma

A lovely portrait of this little sparrow.The DOF and POV are very good.The details in the plumage are very sharp.Very good timing to get it in mid-squawk . Very nice neutral OOF BG.TFS

Rob

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 786 W: 0 N: 1581] (7256)
  • [2007-04-04 21:50]

Hello Vicma
Very nice picture , very sharp image with nice DOF and good BF colors.
TFS Michel

hi vicma,
very nice shot, well composed with fine pov, excellent bg, lovely dof, nice colours, very good pose, sharp image with good details,
very well done, tfs & regards
pankaj

Nice detailed shot of a fledgling, well taken.

Greg

Hi vicma,

A very good capture with diffused background , Sharpness and composition is great.The moment is frozen superbly.

Tfs

Pawan

Hello Victor,
A lovely feather ball, singing out loud!
Action is well captured, superb DOF and subject is presented in a fine composition!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hola Victor,
Una imagen muy bien captada, despué de leer el título, la expresión del pájaro me parece de lo mas simpático, excelente la nitidez, textura, luz y fondo, enhorabuena. Un cordial saludo
José Ramón

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3160 W: 148 N: 4787] (15449)
  • [2007-04-05 7:37]

Hi Vicma.
Amazing pictured scene. Bravo. Great captured moment. I like your composition so much as well as the delicate dark colour palette. The shot will be simple outstanding if the DOF would be larger a bit. I almost always apply ISO 400 in such cases. This is a small reserve. At your camera may be ISO 800 would be seen very well.
My best regard and TFS.
Alexei.

what a wonderful shot of this juvenille. Timing is everythign and you got it right here. Great OOF BG as well.

TFS
Emma

Lol Vicma,
This is a very hungry one. This pose and action you captured are really funny with excellent details, good exposure and composition. I like this POV and this trunk the bird is on :) Well seen and thanks,
Claudine

Hi Vicma,
Super capture wth great pose,lovely details too,
tfs

Mircea

Oh i know how things can become angry when not given food.. as they say "a hungry man is an angry man", i guess in this case, "a hungry bird is a angry bird". I like this shot with perfect timing of it chirping. A good shot with sharpness at appropriate areas. I'm not to bothered about the OOF wing. I think the DOP is just right and this shot is good.
Steph

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 956 W: 5 N: 2365] (8834)
  • [2007-04-05 9:34]

Hello Vicma,
Great capture.POV,lighting,BG,pose of bird and details are excellent.TFS

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  • juanjo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 169 W: 8 N: 27] (1142)
  • [2007-04-05 10:25]

hola VICMA

muy buena foto de este pájaro, con una bonita expresión.
los colores son muy naturales.
el fondo va muy bien.
la nitidez es muy buena ( qizás te has pasado con la máscara de enfoque)
la composición del pájaro encima de este sarmiento queda muy bien

saludos

jjo

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  • mikou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 863 W: 73 N: 1348] (5265)
  • [2007-04-05 13:35]

Hi Victor.
This is excellent capture with perfect sharp details on plumage.I like pose of this bird and superb OOF BG.Well done,TFS.
Best greetings Milos.

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  • sily Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 6 N: 392] (1887)
  • [2007-04-05 13:40]

HI Vicma!
Great composition POV and color , very interesting and beautiful portrait of this bird with great DOF I love it!

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  • GLEM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 87 N: 693] (5741)
  • [2007-04-05 15:06]

hi Vicma,
superbe image, la gamme des gris est exceptionnelle. Excellente couleur, et ouverture du bec, cela donne du mouvement.

tfs

Bonsoir Victor,
Voilà une image bien attachante, qui montre la vulnérabilité de l'oisillon et toute l'autorité que son instinct lui commande pour rester en vie... Ton sujet est parfaitement mis en valeur, comme posé sur un piédestal. Bravo
Amicalement
Hervé

hello vicma!
great one with good sharpness
and fine pov and dof
nice with the open beak and
the fine background
very good!

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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 147 N: 7948] (24747)
  • [2007-04-06 13:13]

Holá Victor Manuel,
Fine capture of a young and hungry sparrow.
Superb sharpness with detail, Bg and presentation.
TFS and best wishes, Ivan

Hi Vicma,
great perspective and lovely delicate colors,very well done.TFS
greetings

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1479 W: 18 N: 3030] (11110)
  • [2007-04-06 14:22]

That is just gorgeous Vicma. What a wonderful shot, great timing, perfect exposure, great POV and pin sharp...and just so cute :)

TFS

Karan

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  • Ken52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 663 W: 98 N: 1262] (4185)
  • [2007-04-06 19:21]

Outstanding bird portrait with exceptional sharpness and detail. A very nice DOF and great soft colors.

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2577 W: 170 N: 7864] (24859)
  • [2007-04-07 6:37]

Hello Vicma,
Beautiful capture of this little bird. He looks pretty helpless and hungry!! Very sharp details and nice colours. I lilke the colour of the background too and the composition is very fine!
TFS and best wishes, Ulla

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2390 W: 194 N: 1991] (8113)
  • [2007-04-07 7:59]

Hi Vicma,
looks lovely, specially the colors of the BG work very well. The cute pose and the undistracted view of the bird makes a lovely composition.
A little to much noise reduction perhaps as you loosing a view good details.
TFS..Sky

Hola Vicma,

Great timing and a very good capture of this lovely little bird.
Good details, composition, colours and framing.
TFS

Saludos, Nel

Muy buenas Victor
La verdad es que los jardines son una gozada para fotografiar avecillas.... pero dale un respiro que no para de pedir comida.... o era a tí para que le inmortalizases de esa manera tan bonita.

Estamos de agua hasta la coronilla.... y es que no hemos podido salir nada en todo estos días de fiesta hay que jorobarse... bueno yo estoy preparando mis fotos de la exposición que tengo ahora en abril. El lunes me toca llevar las fotos al laboratorio.

Que tal esos días de semana santa, curraste mucho.

Un abrazote

Excelente expresión del ave y ( aunque relativamente importante para mí) un fabuloso enfoque. Encantado de conocer tu galería y de los comentarios que me has hecho y puedas hacerme, sobre todo de los negativos.
Un abrazo desde Catalunya: J. Ignasi

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2135 W: 224 N: 3948] (13111)
  • [2007-04-08 10:16]

Hi Vicma

A lovely capture from you!
The details here are nice, the blurred BG is excellent, but what i like the most is the great pose of the bird, with its beak widely opened.
Well done!

Bravo, TFS and Happy Easter!
Horia

Great pose and lighting! excellent timing too.
Well captured...
Cecilia

bonjour vicma
ce que j'aime sur cette photo c'est qu'il a le bec ouvert et c'est une chose que je n'ai encore pas reussi a avoir.cela donne de la vie a la photo.
bravo.
laurent

Hello Vicma superb detail and sharpness, well timed, nicely composed tfs best rgds Necip.

Hi Vicma,
I don’t mind the DOF is a bit shallow.
Well composed image.
TFS
Annick

Hello VICMA,

This is a very good shot of a small, little fellow! You captured the action very well! He definitely seems to be hungry!

Composition:

You did very well on the composition! The bird looks like a statue on its support! I love the way you captured the bird with open beak against the plain, OOF background! The action reads very well! I would have preferred a larger empty space in front of the bird. This is a minor point and as I said, just my personal preference. The dreamy background suits your picture very well as it isolates the subject perfectly! The composition is clean and simple and the absence of any distracting object is a big plus! Just the way a bird photo should look! Very well done!

Colors:

The color range is pretty reduced but there are plenty of neutral gray tones which create a pleasant image. They look natural and well saturated!

Contrast:

By having similar colors in both foreground and background, you kept the contrast pretty low. However this isn't an inconvenience. On the contrary, this is what makes your photo so special.

Exposure:

Exposure is excellent! Especially when I look at your settings I realize that you took the photo in low light conditions where the tripod was a must. However, you were lucky the bird wasn't moving during exposure so you could get super sharp details in its head! In spite of the low light conditions you exposed the scene very well to preserve great details and don't underexpose the shadows. Great job!

Focus:

Focus was achieved precisely on the subject's head where sharpness is the best. The Large aperture created an amazing background to isolate the bird perfectly!

A wonderful picture where you captured great action! Outstanding job! Thanks for sharing!

With Friendly Regards,
Eddie

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  • Isu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 313 W: 0 N: 21] (1663)
  • [2007-04-21 18:53]

Una imagen que deja ver lo delicado y conmovedor que resulta el pajarito bebé. Buena pose y colores muy nítidos.

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  • Perro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 59] (553)
  • [2007-06-17 23:24]

Hola Vicma,
Outstanding captured action!
Composition, point of view are perfect.
Exceptional sharpness, the details in the plumage are amazing.
I like the pose of the bird and the action you have captured.
Very nice background too.
Congratulations Vicma!
My best regard and thank you for sharing.
Janette

Hello Vicma,
very well saturated colour in soft-toned!
best pov and sharpness with details
well done
cheers
Tony

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