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sparrows...
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Copyright: VICMA CS (Juyona) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2102 W: 6 N: 2113] (13565)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-27
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 400D eos, Canon 100-400mm IS USM, Digital
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-04 9:06
Viewed: 697
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 84
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
In the afternoons in my garden the sparrows are very numerous...
it is a pleasure to see these restless birds, now that the grapes and the figs begin to sprout, they are a true problem.
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Hi!
Nice portrait of sparrow. Great details, smooth BG. Good POV.
TFS!

Hi,
Good image as it has a lot of detail. Good sharpness.
I like the brownish colours. Well composed.
TFS
Annick

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3160 W: 148 N: 4787] (15449)
  • [2007-06-04 10:06]

Hi Vicma.
Your sparrow picture is amazing. You managed to reproduce its state of mood excellently. I also like wonderful pictured scene, outstanding composition and unique. lovely colour palette. Superb elegant work. Bravo and TFS.
Alexei.

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  • ridvan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 563 W: 0 N: 1148] (5188)
  • [2007-06-04 10:12]

selam vicma; excellent close up shot of this lovely bird,good details presented , very nice BG and POV, well captured with nice colours TFS
regards
ridvan

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1800 W: 29 N: 5223] (17114)
  • [2007-06-04 10:37]

Hi Vicma,
Wonderful shot of this sparrow. yes they are very restless but here it looks calm and composed. Nice colour tones and immaculate sharpness. Excellent POV and DOF. Superb BG. I like the way it sits with all elegance. Very nicely composed. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

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  • ciccio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 52 N: 345] (2715)
  • [2007-06-04 10:53]

Hola Victor, una ricura de gorrioncete, los tienes bien alimentaditos. :-).

La foto es preciosa, por ponerle algun pero, lo veo algo centradillo, quizás le hubiera dado algo más de aire por la izquierda. El palo inclinado, la nitidez y el fondo son de lujo.

Un abrazote

José Luis

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1064 W: 26 N: 3196] (11459)
  • [2007-06-04 11:39]

Hi Vicma,

wonderful earthy tones in this shot and the composition and details are excellent - very well done indeed!

tfs,

Paul

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5171 W: 297 N: 4050] (13069)
  • [2007-06-04 12:05]

Hello Vicma,
Excellent capture of this cute sparrow.POV,harmonious colors,clear details,exposure and composition are wonderful.
TFS..:-)

Soooo cute, Vicma, that's a lovely shot of this nice bird, excellent sharpness, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hola Victor,
Siendo tan comunes tú los conviertes en estrellas, extraordinaria la definición, con luz y fondo muy bellos. Saludos
José Ramón

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2577 W: 170 N: 7864] (24859)
  • [2007-06-04 12:50]

Hello Vicma,
They may be a nuisance at times but I love them! Your capture of this young one is really beautiful, very sharp and I like the fresh colours of the plumage. The background fits very nicely too. Personally I would place it a little bit more off-centre.
Many thanks and regards, Ulla

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1479 W: 18 N: 3030] (11110)
  • [2007-06-04 13:23]

Hi Vicma

That is a charming shot of the sparrow. Lovely clour tones here, wonderfully sharp and great POV. Excellent DOF and composition as well. A perfect sparrow shot

TFS

Karan

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 786 W: 0 N: 1581] (7256)
  • [2007-06-04 14:07]

Hi Vicma
Very nice composition.The image is sharp with a lot of details in the plumage,POV and DOF are excellent.I also like that blur BG.
TFS Michel

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  • Hil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 750 W: 11 N: 1442] (4951)
  • [2007-06-04 15:57]

Hi Vicma,

What a lovely shot of the Sparrow, really nicely presented composition with a great POV and a fine pose, the feather detail is nice and sharp and I really like the warm colours tones.

TFS Hilary :o)

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  • Brodel (74)
  • [2007-06-04 17:02]

Muy indefenso parece este pajarito que parece tener frío.
Preciosos colores. Hasta otro día. L y H.

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  • Isu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 313 W: 0 N: 21] (1663)
  • [2007-06-04 18:24]

Saludos vicma, excelente composición, colores muy bien definidos, está visto que usted es un artista pillando a estos personajillos... a propósito debe usted tener un jardín impresionante. Sira

Hello Vicma,
Your cute friend looks so fragile and delicate :) This is a tender capture with superb details and beautiful BG and colors. He looks very nice :))) Thanks,
Claudine

Hola Vicma, splendid little sparrow with great pose, lovely composition with blurry BG, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hello Vicma
Excellent shot of this Sparrow,
Perfect focusing,DOF and BG,
Fantastic colors and POV,Superb shot,friend

Regards
Fartash

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2390 W: 194 N: 1991] (8113)
  • [2007-06-05 6:40]

Hello Vicma,
well captured, nice side view of this bird.
Great details and very nice sharpness.
Excellent composition with a lovely neutral BG.
TFS..Sky

Muy buenas Victor
Da gusto ver como trabajas las pajarillos, un fondo muy bueno que le va de perlas (de plumas, mejor dicho)al gorrioncillo la nitidez de lujazo.... pero yo le hubiera ajustado un poco más al borde derecho ya que tenías como dos dedos +ó- por ese lado y asi le hubieras dejado un poco más de aire por la izquierda (según el "canon" de la composición)y no quedaría el ave tan centrada. Bueno eso es lo que hubiera realizado el que esto escribe... bueno que sepas a modo de "cotilleo" que mañana cumplo años en TN mi primer aniversario, como pasa el tiempo... bueno un abrazote y mañana subiré algo para ver celebrarlo con "ustedes" a modo canario.
Un abrazote y besos para Mikal bueno y señora también por aquello de que no se me mosqueeeee.
P.D. perdón por la charla..... tengo pendiente un correo sobre picapinos.

Hi Vicma,
Very good quality capture, interesting pose, good POV, color, & DOF.
Excellent BG and sharp details. Perhaps just a tiny bit more on the exposure, but a matter of taste here.
Howard

Buenos días Vicma
Este gorrión es muy que ablanda.
La foto es muy bonita
Amistades
Gracias Laurent

Hallo Vicma,

A fantastic picture. Perfect focus, DOF and BG. Well done.

Jan-Hendrik

Hola Victor,
Gran agudeza, detalles finos, imagen aseada. Colores marrones bonitos. Cuadro agradable compuesto. Pozo hecho.

BL

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2135 W: 224 N: 3948] (13111)
  • [2007-06-06 8:09]

Hi Vicma

Even though this is a common subject, you managed to creato such a beautiful photo and composition with it!
The details on its plumage are terrific and teh natural colors are very nice.
The shallow DOF is exceptional and makes a beauty of the BG, too.
Very well done!

Bravo and TFS
Horia

hi vicma!
good shot on the sparrow with
a very nice background and
fine pov and dof!
well done!

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  • mikou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 863 W: 73 N: 1348] (5265)
  • [2007-06-06 14:24]

Hi Victor.
Beautiful picture with lovely little bird,I like this different nuances brown color so much.Great POV,perfect pose and good sharp details.Excellent exposure and very good focus.Well done!
TFS,with greeting Milos.

Belle photo d' un bel oiseau, tous ces animeaux sont jolis et bien pris. Amitiés Thomas

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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1026 W: 5 N: 2887] (10445)
  • [2007-06-06 23:05]

Hola Victor. Fina estampa la de este bello pajarillo. Aqui se les conoce como "Chileros" por que comen de las semillas de los chiles del monte. Hermosa foto. Gran colorido muy natural y exelente nitidez. Saludos Luis52

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 956 W: 5 N: 2365] (8834)
  • [2007-06-07 5:10]

Hello Vicma,
very nice capture with a superb composition; sharpness, colors, light, everything is excellent !

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2422 W: 63 N: 3988] (12860)
  • [2007-06-07 8:02]

Hola Vicma,
Cute pose of this little fellow. I liked the soft colors, composition and your POV. tfs
Saludos,
Selen

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1902 W: 8 N: 4957] (16017)
  • [2007-06-07 10:35]

Hi Vicma,

A beautiful capture of this sparrow who looks so calm and relaxed. The pose is wonderful. Colors and details are excellent against the marvelous background.

Jane

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  • demeve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 515 W: 8 N: 1134] (4174)
  • [2007-06-07 13:00]

Hello Vicma, wonderful shot! What a beautiful sparrow you got here, wonderful collors and patterns, great POV and composition.. well done!

bonjour vicma
photo parfaite dans les details et la netteté,le POV est bon,je trouve juste un peu sombre mais ce n'est que mon avis.
laurent

Hi Vicma,
Splendid picture of sparrow. Lovely color tone with perfect sharpness. Well composed picture. Very well done and tfs.
JC

Hello Victor,
What a fluffy little cutie!
A fine posture and excellent details are captured in the subject...
Image is well composed, and the colours are very natural!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • Boliche (255)
  • [2007-06-10 22:56]

bellisima toma de un gorrioncillo jovencito.... conozco el caso de un señor que los alimenta a diario y que segun me ha dicho tiene una epidemia gorroncilonil en su casa. Enhorabuena

Hola Vicma.

El mas habitual de los pajaros en nuestra vida cotidiana y que pocas fotos se le ven, esta por ejemplo esta muy bonita.

Saludos.
Jose Luis.

Hello Victor,

a very charming portrait with excellently handled treatment of shadows and colours to look very subtle and emotionally appealing.

Thank you! My best regards,
Peter

Lovely sparrow shot nicely posed with good background and fine detail excellent pov tfs rgds Necip.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1422 W: 127 N: 5219] (23113)
  • [2007-09-03 5:56]

Hello Vicma, it's a beautiful Sparrow ! Great background, razor sharp, well composed and well exposed. Great art ! Thanks,

Mario

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