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Mariposilla with broken wings


Mariposilla with broken wings
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Ramon Pato (JORAPAVI) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 650 W: 0 N: 1482] (9913)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-17
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon 20D
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-04 12:25
Viewed: 379
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
I known´t their name. Is appreciated you ID
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Hi Jose Ramon,
yes, it's an old butterfly - but still beautiful. I like the way you present it to us - with a shot inside the shot ;-)
Wonderful sharpness and pretty light and colours, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5171 W: 297 N: 4050] (13069)
  • [2007-06-04 12:29]

Hello Jose,
Very nice capture.I liked POV,blurred BG,details,sharpness and presentation a lot.
TFS..:-)

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  • iris Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 361 W: 39 N: 664] (2071)
  • [2007-06-04 12:29]

Hello Jose,
GReat shot, superb idea to present the other view inset.
Beautiful BG making the subject stand out sharp and clear.
Very well done
TFS & Cheers

Hi Jose Ramon,
this is a nice picture but I found the small picture
is a bit distracting.
The details and Dof are very fine. And I like the
POV and compostion.
Well done.

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  • pvs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1127 W: 255 N: 2426] (11037)
  • [2007-06-04 12:50]

Hi Jose,

A nice capture with good sharpness and detail,I agree with gert,for ID purposes you could better have posted the smaller picture in the ws,anyway well done and tfs

Paul

Despite its slightly tatty wings, this butterfly seems to me to be quite uncommon, Jose. I would be equally curious abouts it ID.
This is a wonderful capture against the most pleasing BG.
Well done and TFS.

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 978 W: 64 N: 1189] (4884)
  • [2007-06-04 13:01]
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Hola Jose Ramón
Pues yo diría que se trata de una Lycaena tityrus un tanto viejecita la pobre. Parece que haya perdido un montón de sus polvitos mágicos de hada del bosque (ji,ji, es que solía llamar así a las escamas de las alas cuando era niña). Pero como no puedo asegurarlo al 100% lo dejaré en puntos suspensivos...
Las dos imágenes son geniales y las has sabido componer de una forma perfecta. Me encanta que se pueda ver las dos partes de la mariposa.
Excelente trabajo, querido amigo.
Saludos
Maite

bonjour josé ramon
la photo generale est magnifique(comme toujours)et parfaite,l'ecart montre bien que ce papillon a deja souffert;
bien vu.
laurent

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1671 W: 24 N: 4846] (15806)
  • [2007-06-04 13:48]

Hi Jose,
Outstanding shot of this butterfly. Nice saturated colours and sharp details. the back light is managed superbly. Excellent POV and DOF. I like its elegant pose, though it looks a little old with broken wings. Very nicely composed. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1657 W: 8 N: 4252] (13851)
  • [2007-06-04 14:04]

Hi Jose,

It's rough to get old. But this butterfly has retained it's beauty. Wonderful colors, details, pose, and bg.

Jane

Hola José Ramón,
Genial el punto de vista!
Muy buena la imagen captada, donde nos muestras a la mariposa con la trompa desplegada.
Me gusta mucho el uso del flash de relleno, conseguiste una iluminación muy pareja y homogénea.
Enhorabuena ygracias por compartir la foto.
Un gran saludo,
JM

Hola Jose Ramon.

Seguramente sobrevivio al picotazo de algun pajaro, yo he visto a varias asi tambien, pero volaban perfectamente, es curioso que hasta la flor esta en las ultimas.

Saludos.
Jose Luis.

Hello Jose
Intersting spiece to shoot,
Great details,BG and DOF,
Fantastic colors and POV,Superb shot.

Regards
Fartash

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  • ridvan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 582 W: 0 N: 1137] (5130)
  • [2007-06-04 17:31]

selam jose; wow excellent close up shot of this butterfly,good details presented ,very nice BG and POV well captured with splendid colours,luck he is still flying and feeding TFS
regards
ridvan

Hola José,
Como siempre nos tienes acostumbrados un documento muy útil y con un gran sentido artístico. La idea de colocar el recuadro con la vista desde arriba es excelente.
Saludos cordiales
Hernán

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  • Isu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 315 W: 0 N: 21] (1659)
  • [2007-06-04 20:33]

Hola jose Ramon, excelente captura buenos colores detalles y composición Saludos

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  • kjpweb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 367 W: 86 N: 1084] (4788)
  • [2007-06-04 21:56]

Great shot with great clarity and detail. Though helpful to see the damage wing - the small picture indeed distracts somewhat and breaks the overall composition of the large image. Good image nevertheless! Bravo! BR Klaus

hi jose,
nice to see your lovely post again, excellent macro shot with very good details, nice colours, lovely dof, good pov,
well done,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2035 W: 212 N: 3613] (12038)
  • [2007-06-05 2:57]

Hi Jose

Another splendid presentation from you and another terrific macro shot!
The details here are great and the two POVs allow us to see this butterfly very nicely from both angles.
The natural colors are great and the DOF that you used is impeccable!

Bravo and TFS
Horia

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  • GLEM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 523 W: 87 N: 693] (5737)
  • [2007-06-05 6:01]

salut Jose,
très belle image, malheureusement c'est un papillon en fin de vie. Excellente netteté, couleur. La présentation est aussi très instructive.
tfs

gl

Great shot, muy bien, phenomenal.
Regards
Julian

Hi Jose Ramon, splendid butterfly with broken wings, wonderful colors, great sharpness and lovely details, I like it, ciao Silvio

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1988 W: 6 N: 1926] (12955)
  • [2007-06-07 10:27]

Hola José.
todo no puede ser belleza,
bella captura y excelente momento captado.
una mariposa que ha librado 1000 batallas,
saludos amigo,
mañana regreso,

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