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Asymmetry
Photo Information
Copyright: Marta Queralt Lopez i Salvans (eBirdy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 85 W: 1 N: 75] (512)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-23
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon 400D Digital Rebel XTi, Canon 18-55mm EF-S f/3.5-5.6 II USM, Hoya 58 mm Skylight 1B
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1600 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Nature around me [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-07-22 13:43
Viewed: 1011
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Nature has imperfections, like this asymmetric Papilio Machaon without one of the wing tails. Maybe it was an accident, a predator...
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La Natura té imperfeccions, com aquesta Papilio Machaon, sense una de les cues de l'ala, potser per un depredador, un accident...

23.07.07 - I attached a WS following your suggestions...

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To jignasi: Corre,corre,...eBirdy 1 08-04 12:51
To Patleboss: Papillon roi...eBirdy 1 08-04 12:46
To Proframe: Leaving some room...eBirdy 1 08-04 12:16
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  • Great 
  • jorg (631)
  • [2007-07-22 13:57]
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Hola Ocella,que tal.?
Bona la papilio,jo pot-ser l´hagués presentat girada cap a la dreta,ho he estat miran i m´agrada més.
Llàstima del accident de la cua.
apa,siau.
joan

the composition has good aesthetic
very nice colours and contrast
well done
regards
jo

Hi Marta,
I agree with what Nick wrote but other then that the image is fabulous. The detail in the Butterfly is superb. What wonderful colours and markings it has. Nice.
Cheers,
Debbie

Bonic contrallum encara que la composició una mica al límit jajajaaj Has volgut aprofitar la flor i has estirat la foto un ou. Et va fer correr molt la papilio ?? Les papilio i semblants perden sovint aquesta part del seu cos però poden viure perfectament sense ell; normalment son els depredadors, com els ocells, els culpables. Abraçada des de lleida Marta.

Hello Marta,
You do have a great eye for composition making this a square format image with the diagonal line and to add the flower in the lower right corner, but the butterfly is a little to tight cropped in my opinion.
Would love to have seen a bit more space at the top left corner in front of the Swallowtail.
Exposure is spot on and the colors are wonderful.
The clean cut of tail on the left side does'nt look like an accident or predetor to me, but more of an imperfection.
Thanks for sharing.
Kindest regards,
Harry

  • Great 
  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2904 W: 34 N: 8600] (32056)
  • [2007-07-23 10:28]
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Hi Marta. a nice shot of the butterfly. good colour and detail. you have put the butterfly for me a bit to much up in the left hand corner. but still a nice picture. well done TFs.
Nick..

  • Great 
  • demeve Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 603 W: 11 N: 1627] (5989)
  • [2007-07-23 11:01]

Hola Marta,
Muy linda captura, lovely butterfly, interesting composition
Great POV and composition, very sharp image and well focused
..Well Done..

Everton.

Haloo Marta.
Piêkna kompozycja, piêkne kolorki.
Brawo!
Pozdrawiam Bogus³aw.

Belle photo de ce papillon jolies couleurs, bonnenetteté, beau flou autour. Amitiés Thomas

Hello Marta lovely composition I like how you included the bottom right flower and created a diagnol feeling here. Lovely colour tfs rgds Necip

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  • jmirah Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 503 W: 5 N: 1129] (4631)
  • [2007-07-24 15:33]

Beautiful capture...Fantastic BG...Excellent detail and color...TFS
Jim

  • Great 
  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2405 W: 63 N: 4226] (13820)
  • [2007-07-25 12:22]

Hi Marta,
Your choice of composition is interesting, I liked this one. Nice POV and good colors. TFS
Best wishes,
Selen

Hello Marta, very nice composition of this butterfly, his name in french is " grand porte queue" same if this one in has only one
friendly,
Pat

Hermosa papilio Marta
maravilloso colores y detalles


ciao sERGIO

A wonderful composition. In my weird little mind I thought of a Butterfly Fairy Wand. :)

Great color - great lines. Lovely!

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