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Copyright: lens aleksander (lensaleksander) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 301 W: 0 N: 28] (1102)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-29
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 300D, 80-200mm
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/501 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-21 5:24
Viewed: 741
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
i know these birds are not very wild but the composition was nice with the fence
happy to share
aleks
leman lake lausanne suisse
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To kapthakan: hi hakanlensaleksander 1 01-05 09:08
To rundive: MERCIlensaleksander 1 12-04 10:53
To abettine: merci beaucoup pour tes messageslensaleksander 1 11-24 10:10
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To cali: mercilensaleksander 1 09-06 11:54
To afaust: thank youlensaleksander 1 08-01 09:52
To SynergiA: merci in frenchlensaleksander 1 04-05 15:09
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To kag: thank you kellylensaleksander 1 03-22 16:08
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Fantastic POV and lovely composition. The repetition of all those tails makes for an amusing picture, and the way the closest one is looking at the camera... the Robert De Niro of the bird world.. "Are you looking at me?" Good DOF, focus fading those other tails away into a very soft background.

Only thing I would do is a bit of editing, to remove the haze and heighten the contrast. Did a WS for an example.

TFS Finny

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  • kag Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 39 W: 0 N: 20] (102)
  • [2007-03-21 10:39]
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A very good photo. you did very well to capture them like this. Good colour and focus. well done. TFS.
Kelly.

What a fine composition! Creative, for a subject that often makes that a challenge. Tres bonne!

Bonjour,
Je trouve l'effet plutôt comique. Bien vu !
Bonne journée.
clnaef

LOL this is really interesting!
Steph

Ciao!
Fantastic composition!

lens, very well composed!

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  • cali Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 0] (316)
  • [2007-09-06 10:04]
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fantastique et original. j'aime beaucoup ce travail. le regard du premier oiseau ainsi que la suite des queues qui donnent une certaine recherche. le flou de la barrière qui renforce la netteté de l'oiseau. sincèrement c'est super bien. bravo.

Very nice photo Aleksander,

I really like the shallow DOF that makes the tails look like a PP effect.
The little fellow in front seems angry :)

Cheers

Le top ! L'alignement est parfait, et la première mouette a pris la pause, en plus !
Bravo !

Excellente image, j'adore.
Belle alignement, on dirait qu'elle pose pour toi.
Il y a une belle profondeur dans l'image: belle composition.

Super coup d'oeil

Fred

great composition, you shot it from the correct pint of view and the effect is simply beautiful, is also nice the look of the bird directly in the camera
bravo
ciao
franco

Hi Aleks.I see your shot very good they are on the line too.Beautiful colours and beautiful composition well done.

Regards.
Hakan

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  • Mick_M (24)
  • [2008-09-01 16:45]

Salut Aleks,
Excellente photo, moment et cadrage.

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