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Copyright: Toni Alvarez (Toni) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 2 N: 316] (2034)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-17
Categories: Birds
Camera: KonicaMinolta Dynax7D, Tamron 200-500 DI
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-09 12:21
Viewed: 1562
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
I don't know what this duck is called in English. Anyway, she wasn't scared of taking on the geese so as to grab some of the bread crumbs.
The shot was taken by the Sauvabelin Lake in Lausanne.
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  • sAner Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1490 W: 72 N: 1427] (4744)
  • [2005-04-09 12:43]

Hello Luc! The portrait is very nice and very close. The details on the head and the eye are perfect. colors are very good too. POV is good. It's too bad that the bill is slightly OOF ... Was the DOF too short or was she moving her bill when you pressed the button? Anyway, well done & TFS! :)

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1540 W: 309 N: 2234] (8915)
  • [2005-04-09 12:44]

Excelent capture and well done on this composition. Excelent view.

Mike

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  • IdoTT Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 19 N: 86] (482)
  • [2005-04-09 13:13]

Great catch Antonio!
The bottom corner of the pic is a bit hot.
The duck is very sharp and the eye is clear!
I don't like the BG of the road but that only my opinion.

WellDone!

Halo Toni!
It's great portrait! I love this big head ;-))))

Hi Antonio, I like the composition of this shot, but it is a little overexposed and could also have done with a touch more DoF, to get the beak in focus too. Good detail on the head feathers and a good low perspective.

Toni, Nice close-up shot with a good/interesting POV. It's a great shot that would be even better with a bit more DOF..Well done!

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 148 N: 6113] (18648)
  • [2005-04-10 0:59]

Good capture Toni. She was too busy eating to worry about you and your camera. Well done.

Nice picture Toni.
Good POV, with a nice low angle, good details on the head especially the eye and good colours. As mention it has a shallow DOF and some parts are overexposure.
What lens did you use ?
Well done.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2005-04-10 5:10]

Even though you lost some DOF on the beak, this image is great. The eye is nice and sharp and the composition very good. I like the POV as well.

Very well done and thanks for posting

Very good picture.. Good details, sharp.. A little overexposed in right bottom corner. Glad she took on the geese :)

Elize

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2156 W: 322 N: 4258] (16906)
  • [2005-05-12 20:30]

Toni, a very nice moment.

Great composition and pov. Maybe focus is a little soft, but that's a minor nit.

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