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Copyright: Keith Dawes (daweska) (18)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-05-04
Categories: Birds
Camera: Fuji Finepix S20 Pro
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/480 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-12-13 18:05
Viewed: 957
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mute Swan taken on the River Wey near Guildford
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Very nice Keith.
Good details, colours and composiiton..
Maybe a little to dark, try to use a fill-in flash when you take a backlight picture.
Very well done.
Welcome to TN.

Very nice portrait, but it would have been good to use the flash...

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-12-14 9:15]
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Bienvenido a TN Keith.
Una bello primer plano con muy buenos detalles y agradable POV.
La imagen es algo pequeña, recuerda que puedes publicar cuadros de 800x800 pixels.
Tampoco incluiste en los datos de la foto que cámara has utilizado.
Recuerda participar con tus críticas a las imágenes de otros usuarios para el crecimiento de TrekNature.

Welcome to TN Keith.
Beautiful close up with very good details and pleasant POV.
The image is something small, remember that you can publish pictures of 800x800 pixels.
You did not include either in the data of the photo that camera you have used.
Remember to participate with your critics to the images of other users for the growth of TrekNature.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 315 N: 4404] (14713)
  • [2004-12-14 16:21]

Bienvenue sur TN, Keith.
Joli portrait de ce cygne trompette.
Bonne utilisation du contre-jour.
Excellente composition.
Au plaisir d'admirer tes prochaines photos et de lire tes notes.
Merci

Welcome to TN.
Nice fist post to begin with.
It looks very good, but if I could see in the 800x800 TN offers you, surely I would see more details and have a better idea of it.
Hope to see more photos and critiques soon!

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-12-17 11:21]

Welcome here to TN Keaith, and I like your 1st post. The sharpness and DOF is excellent.

Very well done and thanks for posting. I hope to see lots more of your work.

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