<< Previous Next >>

Mirror image


Mirror image
Photo Information
Copyright: David Moreau (DLM) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 2] (124)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-15
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D70s
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-08 17:29
Viewed: 1114
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was taken at Rhoose point Near the airport,Taken in the early evening.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekNature members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To AdrianW: Mirror imageDLM 1 08-11 13:05
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Nice shot! You've captured this swan well. I really like the reflections, and the image projects a feel of calm serenity - I don't know why swans seem serene in photographs, in reality they're just a large amount of hissing, flapping, anguish with wings ;)

My biggest nit is the swan itself seems quite overexposed, not sure whether that's capture or post-process related, but your histogram view should have shown that - there's nothing much we can do in post-process to get the clipped highlights back, unless it's RAW in which case you may stand a chance with some of it. My best advice? Always check your histogram when shooting a bright subject on a dark(ish) background! Whenever I shoot a subject like this I always dial in -1 stop exposure compensation before I take the shot, otherwise unless you have spot-metering, you'll blow the highlights...

Despite that, it's a nice capture :-)

I would agree that the swan is over cooked, and has lost all feather detail in the whites there. Also, the reflection is a little chopped up, a really calm evening with minimal wind ripples would have worked better. Maybe another time?

  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4774 W: 294 N: 4020] (13209)
  • [2005-08-09 3:55]

Hello David!
Very nice capture.POV,pose of swan,reflection on water and composition are wonderful.I think,feathers are a little overexposed,but it's very difficult to get better details on white.I like this work a lot.TFS...:-)

Good try on this.I find the swan to be a bit over exposed.The reflection would have been better if you had picked a calmer day. Nice shot though.

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF