sunset cold

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• coasties (27492)
• [2006-01-08 4:31]
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Hi Magid

Lovely colours in this shot. I like the composition with the silhouette of the tree in the foreground. Well done. Thanks.

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• Dave (2127)
• [2006-01-08 10:14]

Hi Magid,
Beautiful perspective with this one!
You were high on the mountain! Must be nice...;-)
Good job framing with the tree!
Thanks for sharing,
Dave

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• h_sedghi (421)
• [2006-01-21 7:24]

wonderful shot Magid
lovely colors and composition
rgrds
Hamid

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• Kermode (0)
• [2007-01-25 1:51]
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I like this photograph but found that it did not look right to me. Two things that catch my eye are that 1 it looks skewed like the horizon is not level. Now there is no visible horizon and the clouds may have something to do with this by causing an illusion.
The second thing is that Ito me it felt like there was far too much empty space in the bottom third of the frame.
I did a workshop on it and cropped out the bottom part of the frame so that it was divided more evenly and so that the sun was not so centred in the shot.I felt that even with the tree as a frame for the sun that there was still too much emptiness.
Check the workshop and see if you can see a positive difference.