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Ovan lake


Ovan lake
Photo Information
Copyright: Mehran Jalali (mehrandj7) (78)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-28
Categories: Seascape
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-08-05 4:59
Viewed: 2141
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ovan lake near of Alamut in the state of Qazvin in Iran .
I was there on a jurny with friends . a great memorry . :D
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You have a lovely picture there, but the border really does not do anything for the picture at all, if afraid.

Looking at the picture, your saturation is good, and the mountains have good detail, though an increase in the contrast would help to pull a little more detail from them. you have a lovely blue sky and a really good refelction in the lake.

I have done a quick workshop for you, I hope you don't mind.

TFS
Emma

Hi Mehran,
What a beautiful lake and what an amazing backdrop. The hill on the left is beautifully shapped. Your POV is perfect, with the reed in the f/g and the beautiful reflection in the lake. Great colors and light. I agree with Emma on the contrast and frame.
TFS,
Niek

BTW, you might want to change the catagorie

This is a really tranquil scene and nicely composed. If you could have got the camera a little bit higher it might have improved the photo as you would then be able to see the whole reflection of the hill (at the moment it is obscured by the foreground bushes). I like the bushes so I wouldn't remove them from the composition , just adjust the camera position to give more separation to the elements of the picture.

I would also agree with other comments about the contrast in the photo. I've posted a workshop with my attempt at contrast adjustment. Let me know what you think.

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2256 W: 10 N: 2618] (15517)
  • [2006-08-05 10:51]

imagen muy bonita... contraste y nitidez, muy lograda, buen trabajo. saludos

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  • jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1740 W: 95 N: 2273] (8411)
  • [2006-08-05 12:04]

Hi Mehran,
Wonderful lake, mountains, place and shot! Color, composition and reflexiont are fantastic.

TFS, José M.

PS. A agree con with Emma that the border is not necessary for this beautiful place.

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  • Karin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 418 W: 5 N: 268] (2089)
  • [2006-08-06 9:27]

Hello Mehran,
This is really a beautiful landscape and photograph. Great warm light and good composition with the green in the foreground. Excelent sharpness too.
Very well done and TFS

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