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My First Test


My First Test
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Copyright: Alex Shainshein (s_a_s_h_a) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 62 W: 1 N: 58] (379)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-04
Categories: Insects
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED DX AF-S, Nikon NC 67mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-04 10:22
Viewed: 1102
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my first week and first steps with D80.
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  • Good 
  • Bass Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 0 N: 124] (496)
  • [2007-04-04 10:31]

Hi Alex,
nice grasshoper! The details can be seen very well, and the focus is OK. Maybe you should take some care with the shadows. The one at the up right corner takes out the quality of the picture.
TFS
regards,
Brenda

Hi Alex,
Very good macro of this insect!
I like the sharpness of the image and the focus on the subject.
The texture and details on the insect are a great ones.
The only nit would be the shadow over.
Hope to get used pretty soon to your D80.
Well done and thanks for share it.
My best regards,
JM

  • Great 
  • ridvan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 0 N: 1134] (5196)
  • [2007-04-04 11:45]

hi alex ; despite a little shodow on the grasshopper a great shot of this lovely insect, well captured with good pov,the sharpness and colors are good, well done and tfs,
best regards
ridvan

  • Great 
  • dkaved Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 18 N: 433] (2106)
  • [2007-04-09 16:45]

Hi Alex,
Congrats on your new purchase of the D80!The sharpness and detail of the hopper is very good as are the shades and tones of colour.I do agree with brenda that the shadow at top right is a bit distracting.Have fun with the new toy!!
Regards, David

Hi Alex,
Great shot, superbly focused at head/eyes of this grasshopper. Great sharpness, well done.

BL

  • Great 
  • thor68 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 792 W: 138 N: 1312] (5642)
  • [2007-04-16 14:07]

nice first one, alex! :-)
the focus on the head is good, but gets a little soft on the body - maybe try a higher
f-value (8, 11, 16) for a greater DOF.
a flash can help, too. next stop: macro-lens. *g*
well done & looking forward to your next tries, thor.

  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4774 W: 294 N: 4020] (13209)
  • [2007-04-19 2:09]

Hello Alex,
Lovely close up.Sharpness and details on head is perfect.
TFS..:-)

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