First Sunset

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• loot (8931)
• [2006-03-25 8:05]
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Hi Ali
Very good sunset with nice rich colours. I particularly like the bright cloud above the sun that breaks the monotonous upper half of the photo. You could have lowered the point of view a little bit to include a little more of the mountain range. That way the 1/3 division could effectively been accomplished.
Well done and TFS.
Regards
Loot

PS. You have a dirt speck on the camera's CCD sensor showing in the upper left hand corner and some smaller ones in the righ upper quadrant as well. Use a little manual air blower to get rid of the dust. Make sure not to touch the sensor. If you're not sure how to do this rather get professional advice/help.

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• dew77 (13069)
• [2006-03-25 8:12]

Hello Ai Rıza!
Wonderful sunset capture.POV,warm colors,framing,contrast
and composition are excellent.TFS...:-)
Evet makina sensörünüz kirlenmiş;)Ellerinize sağlık!

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• jmouche (178)
• [2006-03-25 8:56]

Hello Ali!
Very nice capture.POV,framing and composition are wonderful.TFS..José

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• jeanpaul (13841)
• [2006-03-25 11:40]

Salut Ali
Pour ton premier coucher de soleil il est très bien réussi.Belle composition et les couleurs sont très belles et beau cadrage.
Merci et bon week end....JP

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• wallhalla15 (13787)
• [2006-03-25 14:52]

Hello Ali,
a very fine sunset shot. Excellent tone of colours, lighting and great POV. This is a great capture, very well done. Thank you for posting.
Gr.
Heinz

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• Evelynn (12294)
• [2006-03-25 16:34]

Hi Ali,

There are geat colors and sharpness in this image. I agree. It seems like a tad too much sky and not enough mountains.

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• hibou (1509)
• [2006-03-25 18:50]

Hello Ali,
Is a pretty good for the first one. Colors are great. TFS Donald

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• CTP (3183)
• [2006-03-26 0:05]

Hi Mr.Demir,
Nice sunset composition:)Congratulations on your 1st one:)
Great colors,POV,sharpness,framing,cool clouds and lighting.TFS
Chris

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• pablominto (15388)
• [2006-03-26 3:10]

Hello Ali..
A very fine capture where you "hide" the sun behind that cloud formation!
The effect of the lighting is fine and bringing golden linings to the clouds...
Good colours and details all over, in this pleasing composition!
Regards,
Pablo -

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• anavazao (3829)
• [2006-03-26 17:39]

wow,
great landscape with nice strong colours! Good POV, details, composition, ligth...
Thanks Ana:)

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• SunToucher (8606)
• [2006-03-27 5:33]

Hi Ali,
Great first sunset. As Loot mentioned the bright cloud just above the sun is amazing and the POV he mentioned might be a good idea. But in general I like the photo.
TFS,
Niek

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• Luce (58)
• [2006-03-27 9:15]

Beau coucher de soleil. J'aime bien les nuances dans le ciel et les nuages. Les montagnes à l'horizon ajoute un contrepoids à la bande de nuage noir. Bravo

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• EOSF1 (20415)
• [2006-03-27 20:32]

Good one Ali, very well seen and done. Very well exposed. You should have cloned out the little dust bits in the sky.

thanks.

Mario

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• Signal-Womb (10869)
• [2006-03-29 14:52]

Good capture Ali, great colour and cloud formation. Well done.

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• osse (7655)
• [2006-03-30 7:11]

Hi Ali Riza
Excellent tone of colours, lighting and great POV.
Well done my friend.

osse

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• marhowie (34439)
• [2006-03-31 6:51]

Hello Ali,
You have captured a beautiful sunset..It's very nice, and a pleasure to view. You have spots, either on the lens, or perhaps you need to clean your sensor..Well done!

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• livios (16850)
• [2006-03-31 12:31]

ALI, this is a very beautiful photo.

I enjoy colors and saturation, as well as composition.

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• hummingbird24 (64)
• [2006-03-31 22:58]

Hello Ali,

Wonderful sunset shot and great POV.

Excellent details, lighting and composition.

Thank you!