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...and the father steps in...


...and the father steps in...
Photo Information
Copyright: Can Unuvar (Calianis) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 115 W: 14 N: 122] (621)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-15
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 350D EOS, Canon EF 90-300 mm f4.5 - f 5.6
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-27 14:26
Viewed: 869
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It's a sequel to my "Fighting for Food" photo. In this photo the adult barn swallow checks the younglings which have just flied from the nest if they're all right. Unfortunately he has no food with him so the young are a little disappointed.

As a critique from what I've learned from TN, the main subject of the photo is out of focus and the POV is not so desirable I suppose. Nevertheless I just wanted to share it with you.Hope you like it.
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To marhowie: Thanks!Calianis 1 07-28 07:58
To snowfalken: Thanks!Calianis 1 07-28 02:45
To claudine: Thanks!Calianis 1 07-28 02:20
To eruyanik: Teşekkürler.Calianis 1 07-28 02:18
To fyapici: Teşekkürler.Calianis 1 07-28 02:13
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Hi Can,

Nice sequel! Composition is very good! You caught them at the right moment. We feel the agitation. I just wish they were all in focus, but this photo is great anyway... TFS,
Claudine

Merhaba Can!
Kompozisyon ve zamanlama mükemel. Renkler ve kadraj da öyle. Ellerinize sağlık.
Selamlar
Fevzi

Merhaba Can,
Ben çok beğendim, üçü bir arada ve de aksiyon içeriyor aynı zamanda. Ebeveyndeki netsizlik çok önemli değil, aksiyon hali mazur görülebilir :-) Ayrıca gözlemlerini yazmaya devat et, okuması keyif veriyor.
Görüşmek üzere...
Ersin

Very dynamic picture of these three superb birds with great natural colors! You've captured a special moment! Great composition and POV! The picture is very sharp with good exposure! Outstanding job! Congratulations and TFS!

Regards,
Eddie

Hi Can,
Another interesting shot in this set.
You've stopped the action well, showing the interaction of the three nicely :)
Well done and TFS!

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