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Blue portrait
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Copyright: Claudine Besse (claudine) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2445 W: 192 N: 2667] (9647)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-19
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS 40D, Canon 100-400/4.5-5.6L IS
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-23 10:44
Viewed: 774
Points: 84
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Portrait of a Blue Jay taken in my backyard. Blue Jays are birds with strong personality and character. During the nesting season, they are arguing with most of the birds in the neighborhood, especially American Robins. I have seen many territory battles recently. I thought that this portrait was representative of their strong personality. Thanks for looking!

ISO 100
Monopod
Flash extender
Cropped at the maximum
Sharpened
Converted from RAW to JPEG.

PS, I noticed strange texture in the paler zones of the background. I thought I fixed it with Neat Image, it looked OK on my computer but it is not on this site...Why ?!

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  • pvs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1128 W: 254 N: 2428] (11041)
  • [2008-05-23 10:47]

Hi Claudine,

A great close up from this colorfull bird,well used fillflash an still the nice effect of the green OOF BG visible,have a nice weekend

Paul

Splendido ritratto, "un classico della pittura", POV e composizione esprimono al meglio la forte personalità e carattere di questo uccellino, di cui parli nelle note, ottima nitidezza, bellissimi i colori. Grazie e complimenti. Ciao Maurizio

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1895 W: 4 N: 5148] (19630)
  • [2008-05-23 11:14]

Hi Claudine. You get so great results with your 100-400. This is a fine close up of this beautiful looking bird. which youhave captured with fine detail and natural colours. The light in the euye looks first class. well done TFS.
Nick..
Have a good weekend .
PS i have seen this unusual texture some times in my pictures not sure what it is.

Hi Claudine,
Again, great use of the flash for highlight.
POV and composition are unique and very pleasing. Sharpness and exposure are excellent.

TFS Thomas

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  • Hil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 741 W: 11 N: 1381] (4761)
  • [2008-05-23 11:49]

Hi Claudine

Another great shot of your lovely Bluebirds.
Nicely composed with a fine pose and a great POV.
The details are lovely and sharp and I like the eye a lot.
Superb colours contrasting well with the dark BG.

Hil

hello Claudine
This is very beautiful portraite of Blue Jay. Its blue nicely contrasting against greenish BG. light on its eye, focus, composition great. thanks for sharing, have a nice weekend
Ahmet

Hello lady from Mont Saint-Hilaire,
Be careful! Could be some collateral damage in your garden battlefield:-)
Definitely a soldier this one.
TFS
Annick

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  • cako Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 353 W: 0 N: 316] (1777)
  • [2008-05-23 14:58]

Hi Claudine
very nice colors and good sharp
well done.

I do wonder, Claudine, when I'll be able to reach the level of perfection you have.For such a small subject, this pertrait macro is awesome...Very well captured, Claudine.The fine delicate are so sharp that one can almost fell them!
Thanks for the share!
Goldy

Bonjour Claudine,
Excellent portrait of the Blue Jay in fine closeup!
good pose with very fine sharpness, good colour and details
the darker bg makes the subject so outstanding beautiful
many thanks
merci
Tony

Hello claudine,

nice portrait of this blue Jay.
I like the light in his eye.
Very good colours and details.

Gert

Hi Clsudine, splendid portrait of beautiful bird with wonderful details and superb sharpness, perfect focus and fantastic colorful blurry BG, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

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  • eng55 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 351 W: 3 N: 375] (1121)
  • [2008-05-24 1:09]

Hi Claudine,
Beautiful portrait of this blue jay.Expression on face,blurred BG,catchlight in eyes and framing are excellent.
Thanks for posting.

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  • iris Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 361 W: 39 N: 664] (2071)
  • [2008-05-24 2:27]

Hi Claudine,
Quite the beauty that you present here , the jay has become quite an familiar and endearing bird from the presentaitons ayou and some of our other TN friends have made.This is wonderful protrait showing superb details and a very interesting Pov.It blue colours with the light falling tend to take on a silver colour.Very well done.
TFS & Cheers

Hi Claudine

An excellent capture. Good detail and exposure. Expertly done.

James

I am in Vancouver - middle of the night - jetlag!! Thanks for your kind words :)

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1675 W: 24 N: 4870] (15888)
  • [2008-05-24 4:48]

Hi Claudine,
Wonderful portrait shot of the Blue Jay with very impressive sharpness and colours. Superb lighting and exposure on its plumage. Nice calm pose captured with the glint on its eye looks marvellous. The darkish BG works well here. Excellent DOF, POV and composition. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

Bonjour Claudine
Très beau portrait de ce "Blue Jay" tu as perdu un peu de netteté dans le plumage a cause de l'agrandissement mais cela reste une très bonne photo malgré tout
Bien cordialement
Albert

a very nice portrait here Claudine, very good close up, nice quality and very nice to look at, very good photojob., have a nice day.
gr. jaap

Hi Claudine,
Great portrait oıf this cute bird. I like especially extraordinary details in and aroun eye. Well done. TFS. Regards,
Mustafa

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1580 W: 242 N: 5278] (18595)
  • [2008-05-24 13:40]

Hi Claudine,
great portrait of this beautiful Blue Jay!
You must have been very close to have used flash!
Excellent BG. Superb sharpness and clarity. DOF is a bit shallow but is not a big problem.
Great composition.

Well done,
Joe

Dear Claudine
Excellent portrait of this Blue Jay,
Perfect details,exposure and POV.Superb shot my friend.

Regards
Fartash

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 839 W: 4 N: 2079] (9752)
  • [2008-05-24 23:00]

Hello Claudine, This is superb and brilliantly amazing. The full blown up is just superb. Lovely clarity and sharp. Ganesh

What a portrait! Great detail and wonderful catch-light in the eye. I don't see any problem with the background. Looks good to me.

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  • rdfoto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 375 W: 0 N: 747] (3202)
  • [2008-05-25 13:31]

Bonjour Claudine
Très beau profile, bonne netteté, lumière et couleurs, très belle attitude (fière) du sujet.
Amicalement Robi

bonjour Claudine

bel portrait du Geai Bleu, j'aimes le POV de ton image
le coup de l'oiseau par derrière, belle luminosité
du Geai Bleu avec d'excellente netteté et détails, TFS

Asbed

Hello Claudine,
Very nic3e4 close up of this bluejay, fantastic sharpness, beautiful vivid colors, nice clarity and good catchlight.
Angela

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1292 W: 104 N: 4589] (20415)
  • [2008-05-27 14:57]

Salut Claudine, excellent portrait de notre gourmand national! Superbes détails et lumière bien équilibrée. Bravo et merci!

Mario

So good Claudine.
How you managed this close up is beyond me. I cannot even get near a Jay.
The catchlight is perfect.Details and the DOF are as well.That little bit of deep green behind just makes it so nice.
TFS
Enjoying your week I hope.
D

Hi Claudine,

This is such a wonderful portrait of this Blue Jay and your very lucky you can see them in your own backyard!
I like this close-up very much, colours are beautiful, good light, sharpness and composition too.
TFS

Greetings, Nel

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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 200 W: 7 N: 494] (1569)
  • [2008-05-30 20:58]

Beautiful image of this Blue Jay Claudine,
I've been trying to get a shot of one all spring but they haven't been cooperating with me.
You have a great closeup that shows the fine features of the head and shoulder area.
Very sharp and detailed with wonderful colours. TFS
Ron

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 989 W: 23 N: 2761] (10082)
  • [2008-06-02 2:04]

Hi Claudine,
this almost looks like a painting, beautiful lighting and colours, a superb shot, very well done.
Paul

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  • martic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 2 N: 144] (1245)
  • [2008-06-02 13:27]

Bonsoir Claudine,
excellent closeup de ce geai que je n'ai pas la chance de croiser dans ma région, j'aime beaucoup l'expression de l'oeil.
très bien vu
amicalement
Jean-Michel

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1036 W: 1 N: 3967] (13346)
  • [2008-06-04 19:26]

Hello Claudine,
Splendid portrait of this proud jay, as your note indicates they sure have attitude. Great work Claudine , thank you.
Rick

Bonsoir Claudine,

Une belle prise de vue rapprochée de la tête du geai bleu, les détails et les couleurs de l'oiseau sont clairs et précis. Le sujet est bien cadré. La lumière a un effet positif sur les couleurs. Bonne soirée.

Pierre

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-06-09 9:34]

Hello Claudine

This is an amazing portrait.
The clarity is exceptional.
Beautiful vivid colours.
Wonderful lighting and contrast.
The POV is super.
TFS
Rob

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1998 W: 6 N: 1948] (13031)
  • [2008-06-16 1:10]

Hola Claudine,
buen retrato y bg.
hermoso foco,
la luz es agradable, :))
saludos.
buena semana.

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  • aido Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1103 W: 173 N: 1227] (4038)
  • [2008-06-16 1:54]

Hi Claudine,

These birds do have strong personalities, as a relative of the Magpie it is understandable. I like the call of the Blue Jay though, quite haunting.

This is a nice enough portrait but I think honestly it's not one of your best. I'm assuming it is cropped from a larger image which has left the detail a little soft. Good colours and good depth of field, a good catchlight in the eye. A little over-exposure around the Jay's face.

The banding in the background is due to jpeg compression. If there is a lot of information/detail in the image, compressing it to post online removes some of that information, which means removing colour information. What you can see is the number of colours in the image being reduced, and therefore the transition between shades of light and dark becomes more obvious. The more the image needs to be compressed, the more information is lost. There is also some colour information lost around the Jay's face, the brighter areas have broken up into just a few shades.

Editing an image in 8-bit mode can also contribute to this, as there are not as many colours available in 8-bit as in 16-bit. Always try and edit in 16-bit, do not change to 8-bit until you want to save a version to post. I try to keep images in 16-bit mode right until I do the 'save for web'.

Hope this helps and I hope I'm talking about the same textures that you are :-) Drop me a line if you need more info.

Kind regards,
Adrian

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  • Nilson Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 347 W: 0 N: 282] (2180)
  • [2008-06-19 15:04]

Ola Claudine
Bela foto desta incrivel ave, com cores bem diversificadas, a nitidez esta muto boa e a luminosidade tambem.
Parabens
Nilson

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 752 W: 58 N: 615] (6297)
  • [2008-06-22 10:57]

Bonjour,
Beau portrait avec un oeil bien vif !
Bonne journée.
clnaef

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2304 W: 59 N: 3674] (11774)
  • [2008-06-22 14:23]

Hi Claudine,
Very nice portrait of this blue jay. POV, composition and colors are very good. TFS
Greetings,
Selen

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2369 W: 164 N: 7114] (22494)
  • [2008-06-23 0:35]

Hello Claudine,
While wondering where you've gone to I now found out that I've missed your last post! This is a brilliant close-up of the Blue Jay with great focus on the eye and sharp details. The beautiful dark background makes it really stand out. Well done!
TFS and cheers, Ulla

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2991 W: 148 N: 4435] (14369)
  • [2008-06-26 22:40]

Hi Claudine.
Great composition of a fine portrait of an Blue Jay. I am impressed with its pose and your POV a lot. Colouration and blurriness of the BG are amazing as well as the lighting, colours and details of the bird. Once more great use of flash equipment My compliments.
Alexei.

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